On The Marc Training

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$211 paid

27 custom designs

13 pre-qualified designers.

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Winning design #23 by cgocampo, Business Card Design for On The Marc Training Contest
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designed by cgocampo

Project description

My name is Marc and I just graduated college and plan on starting a small business. The business consists of me being a personal trainer. I will focus on strength and conditioning. It will be for people at all levels of training from beginners to college athletes. The name of my business will be "On The Marc Training". The only thing I have not come up with is the business cards. You guys are the professionals at this. I am looking for something creative that will catch the eye. I do not have anything specific in mind except for it having to do something that gets the message across. I am open for any ideas of visions you have for "On The Marc".

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  • Hi Marc, Who's your typical client? Male, Female, Age, Fitness, Social status? What's your primary training method? In the gym with machines, outdoor, body only etc.? What's your favourite training tool and which colors would you say describe you and your business? Thank you!
    • clients range from females and males just learning exercise to college and Pro athletes. No machines necessary. A lot of bar and dumbbell work along with different cardio techniques . Gold, Red, and Black

    • Hi Marc, I've submitted a design for a logo in #14 and a preview on a business card in #15.

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      Eirien {*wrote*}:
      Hi Marc, I've submitted a design for a logo in #14 and a preview on a business card in #15.
      |--| I think they look fabulous. I really appreciate it. You put a unique twist to it and opened up my eyes a bit. It was very creative and I thank you.

    • Thank you for your feedback. I see that you have provided information that should be on the business card. Do you like my design and consider it and want me to update the business card with this information?

    • no problem and yes please I would like to see it with my information on it. Thank you very much

    • Hi, I've redone the business card with your information (#26). I hope you like it. Are you sure you don't want your profession rather than your degree on the card? What I mean is that you maybe want to say what your specialisation is: if you are a physiologist, physician or therapists, for example.

  • Hello, I've just submitted a design, would you be able to give me any feedback on it please.
    • Hey. Appreciate your design. It is very nice. I am not great at graphic design, this is why I'm doing this. I do not know if this makes much sense but I would like it a little less "cartoonish". It is the right idea though with the dumbbell and the name, very creative.

  • Thank you but Not exactly what i am going for. What I am going for is more like #1 to let people know that it is a gym atmosphere. Thanks again
  • Thank you for the design. I am looking more for something like #1. A logo that has to do with a gym atmosphere so people get the point of the design. Thank you once again
  • very creative card. I appreciate it. However for right now I am looking more for a logo right now, not so much a card design. More like #1 has done. Thanks
  • Hello! I've submitted #1 and would appreciate any thoughts/feedback. Thank you!
    • Hey I really think that is very creative and absolutely love it. It is a great logo. I will wait for a couple more to come in and give you more feedback. But as the first one to come in, I can see myself using something like this

    • Thank you for the lovely feedback! I will await any further suggestions!

  • Dear CH, can you tell me please you want logo & visiting card ? logo name "On The Marc Training" thanks
    • Hey I do not need the name "On the Marc Training" in the logo. The logo can be anything you picture it to be. As long as it has to do with working out (physical activity)

  • Hello again! I've done all the business cards in all 3 colors with all your information on them. Let me know what you think! #16
    • I think its awesome!!. Just minor things. If it's possible to put the "Fun, Affordable, Results" part vertically on the left hand side. Also, if you can make the font a bit bigger to take up the rest of the card (rest of he right hand side), in the same exact order you have it in though. Name, Degree, School etc....

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      MTBuccellato {*wrote*}:
      I think its awesome!!. Just minor things. If it's possible to put the "Fun, Affordable, Results" part vertically on the left hand side. Also, if you can make the font a bit bigger to take up the rest of the card (rest of he right hand side), in the same exact order you have it in though. Name, Degree, School etc....
      |--| Thank You!

    • I have the modified version up! #17 Let me know about any other alterations. Thank you!

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      cgocampo {*wrote*}:
      I have the modified version up! #17 Let me know about any other alterations. Thank you!
      |--| Okay! so I am between #16 and #17. If possible to get the font bigger in #16 to take up the whole card keeping the same bottom Fun, Affordable, Results with the logo design. As for #17 if we can get the same logo vertically Fun, Affordable, Results (with the weights at the end) and make the font a bit bigger on the right (leaving my name the same size). So basically its between those 2 and ill see how I like them....This will most likely be my last comment until I choose the winner. Thanks for everything!! You have been great... if not possible to add more designs here...MTBuccellato@aol.com is where you can sen them. Thanks!

    • I've submitted the updated business cards #23 and #24. Hope you like them! Great working with you and thanks!

    • Amazing! love #23.That is definitely what I am going to go with for sure. Just one last thing. Under my name if we can add Personal Trainer. Thats it!! and I will then chose that new one as the winner. If we have to make my name a little smaller font that is fine! Thank you so much!! Glad how this whole contest progressed.

  • Hello! I've modified my #1 design with the new #11 design. Any thoughts/feedback will be appreciated. Thank you!
    • Hey I love it.Is it possible to make #11 design in the Red and tan (middle one) from #1

    • Absolutely! Here you are: #13 Hope you like it and thank you for the feedback!

    • I love #1. Lets make each color into business cards. I will then be able to narrow it down to my favorite one. The info will be above for my business cards. I want the logo on the back of the card as big as possible. The front you can be creative with. Include my full name, Degree with school, phone number and email. I would also like to add my quote on the front. " Fun, Affordable, Results." -Thanks so much!

    • Sounds good! I'll have them done by today. Thank you! Also, should I email you the business card designs? I think I've almost reached the upload limit on this contest.

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      cgocampo {*wrote*}:
      Sounds good! I'll have them done by today. Thank you! Also, should I email you the business card designs? I think I've almost reached the upload limit on this contest.
      |--| If the contestholder rates the entries 30 points or more you will receive another upload

    • Thanks Appreciate it so much...email MTBuccellato@aol.com if you have reached the upload limit. Once again thank you a lot

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      cgocampo {*wrote*}:
      Sounds good! I'll have them done by today. Thank you! Also, should I email you the business card designs? I think I've almost reached the upload limit on this contest.
      |--| Email MTBuccellato@aol.com if you have reached the upload limit. Thank you so much. greatly Appreciated cgocampo

  • Marc Buccellato B.S Exercise Science & Sports Studies Rutgers University (917) 842-0044 OTMT@gmail.com
    • Thank you. If you have any more suggestions, no outside email information allowed

  • Hi everyone, there was a misunderstanding about the price of this contest. The prize will be $150.00 and I am looking for business cards. I apologize for any inconvenience and please keep up the good work. I appreciate all of the designs.
  • MTBuccellato, The designers are submitting business cards because this is the category and prize amount you started the contest for. Since you are wanting a logo the prize needs to be increased to $223.00, I will then change the contest to a logo contest instead of a business card contest.
  • those are great business cards. But for now I am looking for for just a logo. However, those are very creative and I can see myself doing something like that for a card. But for right now I just want a logo. So maybe the outline of the person with "On The Marc Training' on his forearm.
  • very interesting for a business card. I appreciate the design a lot. However right now I have looking for a distinct logo that I can use. More like #1 and #6. Thanks again
  • MTBuccellato I have noticed you are asking for a logo with the business card. If you need a logo the contest prize is too low. The logo min contest prize $223.00. If you need a logo along with the business card you need to increase the prize amount to cover the logo and the card. Thank you
    • not looking for business cards in this process. Just looking for a logo. Thanks

    • Ok the contest needs to be changed to logo and prize increased to $223.00 Thank you

  • Dear CH, i have submited #21, can you check and give me a feedback? Thank you*
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      AliceMargarida {*wrote*}:
      Dear CH, i have submited #21, can you check and give me a feedback? Thank you*
      |--| very creative and like it. I appreciate you making a design for me. Unfortunately for this design I basically have my mind set up. But, thank you and keep up the good work for the future

    • i've already understood, now i was just looking for some rating points even if just a few. thanks anyway* Good luck with your business.

  • Please provide feedback for #19. If you like the design and prefer more or different colors, I can change it. Thank you for your consideration.
    • Thank you for the design. Not really what I am going for. But I appreciate it. I basically have my mind set just awaiting a design or two for other designers

    • No problem, I'm very used to this. I'm from NJ too.