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What do you people think of my new and first logo ever ?
Hi , im working on my new and first logo ever...as i'm finishing my first year at design school .....
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MNDesign
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Posted 26 May 2008 - 02:45 PM
hi!
nice start!
1) i would connect the "r" and "l" somehow (same width?)
2) why is the "absoluto" wider than "cero" (especially on the left side)?
3) the symbol could be refined
4) in a way i´m missing connection between the two lines...
greetings
nice start!
1) i would connect the "r" and "l" somehow (same width?)
2) why is the "absoluto" wider than "cero" (especially on the left side)?
3) the symbol could be refined
4) in a way i´m missing connection between the two lines...
greetings
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baiskee
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Posted 26 May 2008 - 03:47 PM
Very NEAT but lacks character in my opinion.
The font is pretty boring... maybe like what MNDesign said,you could play around with the letters just to add some "spice". ;D
Keep it up!
The font is pretty boring... maybe like what MNDesign said,you could play around with the letters just to add some "spice". ;D
Keep it up!
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asassat2
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Posted 28 May 2008 - 03:24 PM
I agree that the font needs to be spiced up a bit. Maybe add some depth to the yellow logo by surrounding it with a black border or something. Something that will just add a little more depth of focus to the logo. but good job other than that! thanks!
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Chung Dha
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Posted 31 May 2008 - 10:46 PM
Colorwise isn't that good try some more versions till you get what you like.
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NancyCarter
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Posted 02 June 2008 - 06:34 PM
I'm pretty impressed -- first logo? AWESOME.
I like the fact that it isn't OVER-designed. Simple is good. I like that it retains effectiveness if it were in just black. I think the the cero font is a little boring, but some tight kerning might give it distiction. The secondary text feels less thought out. Perhaps try all caps and wide kerning. I think that the shapes could have more tension or contrast... perhaps more closely consider the negative space between them.
Over all - great job! You are talented.
Kudos to you!
I like the fact that it isn't OVER-designed. Simple is good. I like that it retains effectiveness if it were in just black. I think the the cero font is a little boring, but some tight kerning might give it distiction. The secondary text feels less thought out. Perhaps try all caps and wide kerning. I think that the shapes could have more tension or contrast... perhaps more closely consider the negative space between them.
Over all - great job! You are talented.
Kudos to you!
Blessings,
Nancy
www.NancyCarterDesign.com
Nancy
www.NancyCarterDesign.com
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ichbinhungry
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Posted 02 June 2008 - 07:14 PM
Can you tell us what cero absoluto is? It may help us figure out what we're looking at. I like the font - did you learn in design school that Helvetica is the way to go? Although Helvetica is overdone, so maybe try going to a website like veer.com and looking at the hundreds of fonts they have. They're expensive, but you could always remake it in Illustrator. It's bad, but if you're a student, you won't get in trouble (although if it is a real company that uses the logo, they'll have to buy the font).
The word 'absoluto' is an odd size - it either needs to be bigger or smaller. Try making it fit completely under cero?
The yellow marks are a little big, too. Try them on their own to see how they hold up as a mark. I'd rework the outline, too so that the curve mirrors the o's.
It's a good first logo, though! Logos take years.
Anna
The word 'absoluto' is an odd size - it either needs to be bigger or smaller. Try making it fit completely under cero?
The yellow marks are a little big, too. Try them on their own to see how they hold up as a mark. I'd rework the outline, too so that the curve mirrors the o's.
It's a good first logo, though! Logos take years.
Anna
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zeroabsoluto
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Posted 02 June 2008 - 07:34 PM
First of all...thanks to everybody for your feedback and comments...
i've tried to pay attention to all your ideas and advices , and here's my new baby..new font , new colors...check it out !
Also note that ceroabsoluto has been renamed..as zeroabsoluto with a "z".
"zero absoluto" is my "commercial name as a designer and the name of my own studio (wich someday i will have...haha)
anyways , please feedback will be appreciated , and thanks again.
i've tried to pay attention to all your ideas and advices , and here's my new baby..new font , new colors...check it out !
Also note that ceroabsoluto has been renamed..as zeroabsoluto with a "z".
"zero absoluto" is my "commercial name as a designer and the name of my own studio (wich someday i will have...haha)
anyways , please feedback will be appreciated , and thanks again.
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ichbinhungry
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Posted 02 June 2008 - 08:01 PM
I like the first yellow mark more than the orange one (not because of the colors, but because of the shape). Now it's ambiguous and confusing - it almost looks like a boot. Is there a reason for the mark besides having an icon?
For the font, I personally liked the first one better, but if you want to stick with this one, I would open up the spacing between letters. Also between the words vertically.
For the font, I personally liked the first one better, but if you want to stick with this one, I would open up the spacing between letters. Also between the words vertically.
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DreamSky
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Posted 03 June 2008 - 06:28 AM
I personally like this font better, I like the fact that both words are the same width this time, but...
I don't think it is (even nearly) clear that this is an exclamation mark. I wondered what that orange spot is and I couldn't figure it out. Even now that you told us, it is still hard for me to see this as an exclamation mark.
I think you are going in the right direction but still have some more work to do for this logo.
I don't think it is (even nearly) clear that this is an exclamation mark. I wondered what that orange spot is and I couldn't figure it out. Even now that you told us, it is still hard for me to see this as an exclamation mark.
I think you are going in the right direction but still have some more work to do for this logo.
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NancyCarter
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Posted 03 June 2008 - 02:20 PM
Love the font and the kerning! Great job! Love the use of alternate capitalization too. the over all feel is nice.
The little spur off the bottom of exclamation is too quirky, i think. You might want to try making the o in zero the same color as the exclamation. Or perhaps putting the dot of the exclamation inside the o.
Great work - I like it!
The little spur off the bottom of exclamation is too quirky, i think. You might want to try making the o in zero the same color as the exclamation. Or perhaps putting the dot of the exclamation inside the o.
Great work - I like it!
Blessings,
Nancy
www.NancyCarterDesign.com
Nancy
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