Portfolio Mockup
#1
Posted 10 July 2008 - 05:06 PM
#2
Posted 10 July 2008 - 06:13 PM
http://www.lipsum.com/
http://www.lipsum.com/feed/html
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www.NancyCarterDesign.com
#3
Posted 10 July 2008 - 06:40 PM
Try using Lorem Ipsum for your dummy text - it's far more natural looking than blabla
http://www.lipsum.com/
http://www.lipsum.com/feed/html
Yeah I would use it, but the thing is I will write in Lithuanian language and as I see Lipsum doesn't support my language
#4
Posted 11 July 2008 - 07:46 PM
cool design just increase the visibility on the gray text
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#5
Posted 12 July 2008 - 04:26 PM
I feel that a lot of your design elements are fighting for attention, perhaps try reorganizing them to provide a more fluent white space. Just my thoughts!
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#9
Posted 04 August 2008 - 01:28 PM
#10
Posted 06 August 2008 - 01:40 AM
Ok. The portfolio is almost done with CSS and HTML. It still needs some work with code, cause it's just sucks in IE, but with Firefox and Opera everything should be good. Take a look http://www.blogas.lt/dssd/
Here's my two cents: I agree that B&W designs can be super excellent if done correctly, but there are a couple things, small things, that I think hinder your design from coming across in the best possible way.
First, when viewing the site as a whole, I'm confused as to what kind of theme you're establishing. That is to say, the design seems very basic at first glance, which is excellent if you stick to that, but you've got a couple photoshop brushes stamped here and there of what looks a bit like butterfly wings (especially under the DEMO box) while in other areas (e.g. the graphic under the "stuff" tag) its just abstract smudginess. Then there's the splatter brush in the header. They all combine to confuse the visual themes you're sending.
Second, and this is just my personal taste talking, I think the blurred/faded text only hurts you when working in B&W. Part of the attraction to those sites is the stark constrast, and those blurred edges really remove that from the table.
These comments are only meant as feedback, not criticism. If anything came off as more than helpful suggestion, that was not my intention =)
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#11
Posted 23 August 2008 - 03:20 AM
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