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Kiwi Groove logo, under revision


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#1 Sandersonia

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Posted 29 April 2009 - 05:51 AM

I know this is my second quick post, but don't hate me! I need to finish this quickly (my finals are coming up soon) and any feedback would be nice.

The logo is for a website designed for music downloads. Here are three designs I came up with. Suggestions? What sucks? (I'm going to comment more, but school is quite literally killing me.)

#2 kvasaclimited

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Posted 29 April 2009 - 10:01 AM

I like second and third, though in second I'd have those green bubbles follow the shade style of kiwi-speakers instead simple gradients, giving them position in space, if you know what I mean. Fonts also bug me a bit, though I can't point it what it is that bothers my vision about it.
Hope it helps...
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#3 hellorivenbark

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Posted 29 April 2009 - 03:31 PM

I think the general idea is fairly solid. Experiment with some different font selections and maybe simplify some of the elements a bit.

Just a small observation, but you do have two 'o's right beside each other (groove). A simplified version of your kiwi headphones could easily replace those two letters. ;)

Good luck.

#4 xValentynex

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Posted 29 April 2009 - 09:32 PM

Agree with the two above me...I love the name because you could really incorporate like drums and dancing but I am not a big fan of the dull colors even though I know that is the color of a kiwi...so it is probably just me cause I love brights with black

#5 85graphics

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Posted 30 April 2009 - 01:15 PM

I am actually digging the color palette - the font, not so much. I would agree with some more simplification and thinking about a black and white version. Sometimes a great color logo is almost illegible on a xeroxed piece of paper. Will you be creating support elements for the logo (website, letterhead business cards) sometimes I like to have that idea in the back of my head - thinking how these elements can support a wider range of materials.
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#6 evanfields

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Posted 30 April 2009 - 08:24 PM

You have WAY too much going on. Stick with the kiwi graphic with simple type. This will let your illustration shine and stand out.

#7 jmgarrido

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Posted 25 May 2009 - 01:20 PM

why dont you try to use (in the first one) the headphones as the double oo ?

#8 atondex

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Posted 25 May 2009 - 04:23 PM

It's a good idea, but maybe the design needs some tidying up. Like changing the font to a cleaner one. That would give the design some contrast.
If you like the font a lot, try to link the graphic and the type, so that they make a single element, maybe with a stroke. Also try to change the font size.
The color palette is a good one in my opinion.

Hope that helps !:)




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