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Design.4-Jag [WIP]

Hello everyone,I recently started working on the design for "Design.4-Jag" (my design site [how many...

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#1 Jag

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Posted 13 June 2004 - 07:19 PM

Hello everyone,

I recently started working on the design for "Design.4-Jag" (my design site [how many times can i say design in one sentence?]).

So far I've only got the splash page done, but I'm *very* pleased with the way it came out, and would like some outsiders comments on it

You can see it here: http://Design.4-Jag.com/

Thanks for any comments

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#2 Jag

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Posted 14 June 2004 - 12:32 AM

I just uploaded an updated version

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Posted 14 June 2004 - 12:54 AM

I would be pleased with a work like that. Quite nice and original. The only suggestion I have is that the space between the wires(?) looks kind of empty. Maybe add some objects there? It could give some depth to the whole image. And another thing is that the image looks too monochrome... too much of the same color (grey). If you decide to play with that space, please, consider some different colors when you do.

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#4 bigyou

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Posted 17 June 2004 - 05:56 PM

I'm sorry but I have to tell you.

To me it seems it looks like a big Photoshop tutorial. I'm sure you did not make it with this intention, but it feels to me like you did not put enough of you into this. If you used tutorials, then try to make it again without following it step by step and try to improvise a little bit.

I'm not saying that it doesn't look good at all. It surely looks good. But to me it lacks personnality.

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#5 psyris

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Posted 22 June 2004 - 01:26 PM

yeah i have to agree with bigyou, that it does look a bit like from tutorials but who cares its urs so how it all goes well, though witht the menu system at the top u may want to add some mouseovers to just add something to the site, and perhaps crispen up the quality cos it comes out quite fuzzy in some areas.
though still it is a good design but it just needs some buzz.

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