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Have started to create a brand just through interest from friends. Tell me what you guys think.

to be truely honest I feel it just doesn't work and it's a bit difficult to read.

I think you could come up with something alot better using the word vertical.

sorry I couldn't come up with something more helpful, just think you should start over.


Is this going to be a brand for your self?
If so then what does vertical say about you? how do you want people to see you when they see your image?

I actually thought there were 2 T's, but I still read it as Vertical lol. Hmmmm. Maybe try to make the letters progressively taller until you get to the T, then make them smaller after it? I guess I would have to know a little bit more about what it is you're doing.

Good Luck.
J

I actually thought there were 2 T's, but I still read it as Vertical lol. Hmmmm. Maybe try to make the letters progressively taller until you get to the T, then make them smaller after it? I guess I would have to know a little bit more about what it is you're doing.

Good Luck.
J

I agree, it would be a lot easier to give feedback with more background information first. Also, have you thought about making the word "vertical" aligned vertically instead of horizontally? It would give you a fresh new perspective and be true to its name.

Basically, it represents my mates talking smackas. The word vertical comes into play because when my mates talk smackas everyone raises their hands, (Haring, which means talking smackas, so the hand raised is vertical). And so yeah this is where i got the word vertical.

jmillgraphics i get what your saying. I think i should make the VER/CAL talker and skinnier. Though, i was trying to create the T/I very tall skinny look.

I like it. It has a nice sharp clean look. And the colors go together really well.
But I do agree that having it aligned vertically. That would look pretty cool.

I would make it a bit like this:

http://www.designcon...ticalkopie.html

http://www.designcon...ticalkopie.html

http://www.designcon...ticalkopie.html

it's hard to read, it's confusing ...looks like a double T or maybe the color contrast doesn't help .

Logo looks like Pi in mathematics -3,14