Have started to create a brand just through interest from friends. Tell me what you guys think.
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Have started to create a brand just through interest from friends. Tell me what you guys think.
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Coy
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Posted 20 October 2009 - 04:29 PM
to be truely honest I feel it just doesn't work and it's a bit difficult to read.
I think you could come up with something alot better using the word vertical.
sorry I couldn't come up with something more helpful, just think you should start over.
Is this going to be a brand for your self?
If so then what does vertical say about you? how do you want people to see you when they see your image?
I think you could come up with something alot better using the word vertical.
sorry I couldn't come up with something more helpful, just think you should start over.
Is this going to be a brand for your self?
If so then what does vertical say about you? how do you want people to see you when they see your image?
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jmillgraphics
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Posted 21 October 2009 - 05:27 PM
I actually thought there were 2 T's, but I still read it as Vertical lol. Hmmmm. Maybe try to make the letters progressively taller until you get to the T, then make them smaller after it? I guess I would have to know a little bit more about what it is you're doing.
Good Luck.
J
Good Luck.
J
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shefshef019
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Posted 22 October 2009 - 02:04 PM
I actually thought there were 2 T's, but I still read it as Vertical lol. Hmmmm. Maybe try to make the letters progressively taller until you get to the T, then make them smaller after it? I guess I would have to know a little bit more about what it is you're doing.
Good Luck.
J
I agree, it would be a lot easier to give feedback with more background information first. Also, have you thought about making the word "vertical" aligned vertically instead of horizontally? It would give you a fresh new perspective and be true to its name.
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#5
tebrown
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Posted 22 October 2009 - 10:53 PM
Basically, it represents my mates talking smackas. The word vertical comes into play because when my mates talk smackas everyone raises their hands, (Haring, which means talking smackas, so the hand raised is vertical). And so yeah this is where i got the word vertical.
jmillgraphics i get what your saying. I think i should make the VER/CAL talker and skinnier. Though, i was trying to create the T/I very tall skinny look.
jmillgraphics i get what your saying. I think i should make the VER/CAL talker and skinnier. Though, i was trying to create the T/I very tall skinny look.
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