Posted 07 January 2010 - 06:39 PM
Hi GoldenZ! Thanks for posting your logos.
For the logo on the left, I agree with Coy, an arrow pointing downward symbolizes a loss of productivity, volume, optimization. It looks kind of like a frown. If you're determined to use an arrow, it should most definitely point upward or at least to the right, as in "moving forward". I like the monotone color scheme, and this works well for designs that need to be printed on a budget, but make sure (if you're going to a monotone look) to choose blues that are either from the same family, or choose a pantone blue and use different transparencies. (it could be my screen, but it looks like you're using at least 2 different blues here... and the blue in the arrow doesn't quite match the blue in the square shapes at the bottom, they should either match or contrast/complement each other, not be confusing - i hope that makes sense?)
For the logo on the right, I think I like this one a bit better, probably because of the colors. Red and blue are a good compliment to each other. But, again, if you're printing on a budget, you're up to 4 colors here, and may as well go full process color and give it more depth and detail, or trim down your color choices and make it simpler. I'm not really sure what the icon means, though. It doesn't say "computing" to me.
Overall, I'm not a huge fan of wrapped text, but don't hate it. For high performance computing, I would go with a look that is more techy, performance driven, rather than just create a logo that looks nice, create one that is meaningful. To me, the logo on the left would work better for a packaging/fulfillment company and the logo on the right would work better for a global networking type of company - based solely on the icons.
Hope I've helped, and best of luck with the design! I'd love to see your revisions, if any!

Brandy