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Fifa 2010

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#1 amaconline

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Posted 25 May 2010 - 06:15 PM

Hello and Peace be upon you..

I just have completed my Fifa 2010 design for my print Business.. Tell me what you think. Thank you.

#2 senso

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Posted 25 May 2010 - 06:19 PM

bright, colorful, but the text hard to read

#3 amaconline

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Posted 25 May 2010 - 06:22 PM

bright, colorful, but the text hard to read


Thank you. I compress the quality before uploading it on DC.. the original image is in PNG format and the quality is much better and clear.

#4 atondex

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Posted 25 May 2010 - 07:40 PM

I like the concept and composition. The color combination could use some tweaking, I mean not the whole color scheme, but just the color juxtaposition. For example red near green generates a very strong contrast area, and is generally avoided in design.

May I ask what are you using it for ? Is it for a print ad for a magazine or something ?

#5 amaconline

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Posted 25 May 2010 - 08:42 PM

I like the concept and composition. The color combination could use some tweaking, I mean not the whole color scheme, but just the color juxtaposition. For example red near green generates a very strong contrast area, and is generally avoided in design.

May I ask what are you using it for ? Is it for a print ad for a magazine or something ?


Thank you. Actually the whole colour represents the South African flag. I put design on t-shirts, accessories and sell them online.

#6 melatte

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Posted 25 May 2010 - 10:14 PM

Oh, I really like this idea. The text is hard to read though, maybe put a stroke around the countries so they pop out a little more and the African flag/colors become more of a background feel?

I'm also not a fan of how the colors blur and blend into brown and black in the middle there I suppose that's what you're trying to do, but even if it is, try to make it seem more purposeful rather than sloppily done.

Other than that.. love it. YEEHH FIFAAA.

#7 ZonE

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Posted 26 May 2010 - 04:18 PM

Thank you. Actually the whole colour represents the South African flag. I put design on t-shirts, accessories and sell them online.


Outlines of Africa is easy to recognize and looks great but the black triangle with yellow borders is too blurry. I would change the font of "2010" but maybe that's only me.
Anyways, good luck for your business!

#8 atondex

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Posted 26 May 2010 - 04:21 PM

I put design on t-shirts, accessories and sell them online.


Really ? That's a great idea. Although you would have to market your site, I guess, to make people know about it. Do you have any customers yet ?

#9 Borght

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Posted 31 May 2010 - 08:13 PM

Looks good, but i would change the font. It doesn't catch my eye...

#10 lena

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Posted 31 May 2010 - 09:52 PM

maybe smaller font in white for countries???
maybe some other font for 2010???
like the idea, thou...
every design needs designer

#11 SMJdesign

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Posted 12 December 2010 - 01:16 AM

love this game.




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