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#1 itsme

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Posted 17 August 2010 - 01:33 PM

Hi
I disigned this header..
Please give feedbacks n suggetions..

thankyou

#2 Chung Dha

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Posted 18 August 2010 - 10:48 AM

Hi
I disigned this header..
Please give feedbacks n suggetions..

thankyou


I like headers with logo and slogans on one side so you can add interesting graphics on other side.

#3 davidjgries

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Posted 18 August 2010 - 07:02 PM

The text seems to be too small for this header. I agree that images can be added but I would still make the text larger. Add more interest to the header with images or some fun typography.

It looks nice though. The colors and font choices are nice.

#4 thewestlifeboy

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Posted 25 August 2010 - 05:42 AM

try other font its not looking good. Its too heavy.

#5 cly

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Posted 29 August 2010 - 02:58 AM

Since your font has a deep shadow behind it, I find that it's unnecessary for you to have that blue, gradient-vector background. Keep it simple and consistent, and by that I mean that the font gradient for the "general discussion forum" should be removed. Plus it's too heavy since the size is smaller.

#6 trisler

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Posted 31 August 2010 - 01:26 AM

I think that the font for "OFF THE WALL" should be bigger. I'm not sure if you need to add graphics to it, though.

#7 Desine_Guy

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Posted 03 September 2010 - 12:42 PM

I would try to make the font come out of the wall more. More 3D work.

#8 CCesternino

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Posted 03 September 2010 - 06:05 PM

The Above corrections would do you well but I would try and warp pieces of your text so that it looks like its coming off?

#9 slayyou

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Posted 05 September 2010 - 05:43 AM

yea you could have the off the wall part come of the page a little, or allot all up to you. Maybe something like a peeling sticker

#10 KHDZN

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Posted 05 September 2010 - 12:36 PM

yea you could have the off the wall part come of the page a little, or allot all up to you. Maybe something like a peeling sticker


Good suggestion — that will add a lot of character and strengthen the concept.

#11 Freshmintdesign

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Posted 06 September 2010 - 01:08 AM

Maybe you need a touch of warm color in the background an more bigger title.

#12 darthsheep

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Posted 24 September 2010 - 02:30 PM

Really like bauhaus fonts. Nice choice. You could remove the gradient or whatever is the effect you used in the small text, and try pushing the lettering to the right.

#13 SwimLeka

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Posted 24 September 2010 - 03:46 PM

I agree with making your font size larger. If you want something to really take up some space, put it on one line with an obvious hierarchy so it won't read all at the same importance. Also, currently having a deep shadow on "Off The Wall" is fine, however, the shadow depletes the kerning between your smaller tag line and makes it difficult to read.

#14 GoldenZ

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Posted 24 September 2010 - 07:07 PM

Okay, that sounded like a wallpaper Background (windows Xp), Also it gives me an impression of an advertising Banner, you really don't wanna make this as your website header.

My Suggetion
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1: Try to use Gradient colors for the banner incase you want to increse the width of ur banner,

2: I Believe this is a Photoshop work, The Tagline/Slogan effects is familer try to lose the bevel and give the shadow angle: "90 degree" or "71" Distance:"6px" and Spread 1% with 5px size.

3: The slogan/tagline, can be above the logo or on the right of your logo.

hope this help

Edited by GoldenZ, 26 September 2010 - 02:01 PM.


#15 senoritabg

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Posted 26 September 2010 - 01:26 PM

You can change the size of the font or try another one...Maybe not so big. Also i would add something in the blue background...maybe another shade of blue

#16 jed2

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Posted 04 October 2010 - 03:04 PM

right now the header looks kinda empty try to use bigger, bolder font if its possible.. if you need to stick to this font than just resize it.. and the blue color is too 'cold' in my opinion

#17 hernandez

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Posted 27 October 2010 - 08:27 PM

I think the middle bar of the letter "F" on the title a too much short, cheers.

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#18 lelakijitet

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Posted 29 October 2010 - 06:19 PM

litle graphic can talk some more in it...... nice try bro......

#19 Fabius

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Posted 27 November 2010 - 01:18 AM

bigger font, font is nice, lighter and less busy background

#20 ACEdesign

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Posted 07 December 2010 - 11:41 AM

My suggestions,
- Font size should be bigger (at least "OFF THE WALL")
- Lower sign is too messy to read because of gradient
- Try to change black shadow with some other color, for sign to pop-up little bit
Good luck




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