Feedbacks needed on this logo please

I like the movement.. but its not consistent .. i would make the yellow dot a bit smaller to make it so also the connectors.. I think you have it stroked.. May want to thicken those up so its more visible.. The bottom left dot kind of looks like its floating without the connectors but I dont know if this has any meaning towards the brief. Networking should be tucked under the title and not over extended.

Whats the variant on white?

the tagline could be align with the logo text to look better, also the lines connecting the dots are a little fainted, finally I would probable change the purple color for another more contrasting
good luck

I like it, but I think you should simplify it a bit. Elements seem spread out quite a bit. Networking text needs some adjustments, maybe try a different font. Interconecting lines are too thin for print.

- Thicken the lines
- get rid of one-two dots
- have dots a bit closer to each other
- or maybe try the lowermost dot as the O in netpoint and another dot (smaller and above to the right) as the dot over the i in netpoint.
- the dots are too simetrical (the top and bottom ones, if you draw a horizontal line in the center of the symbol)
- adjust kerning of the text networking to be same width like the text above, maybe even try to change the font, to one from the same family like nextpoint but a condensed one.
- color choice is pretty good, but not sure how it will look on white or light background.

If he hasn't finished this logo by now, he's got more problems than kerning.

Look at the OP

Please, if you have finished the logo by now, could you upload the final one for all of us to see? Regards

If he hasn't finished this logo by now, he's got more problems than kerning. Look at the OP

Great works take time

I can't wait to see the finished logo - it will be mindblowing.