Samantha,
I like the use of the eyes you made (I suppose are yours

). That tells the visitor that you are a human being and not just a name. I also like the simplicity of the flash used that gives the idea of subtile motion. The white space plus the use of the eyes give a sense heaven I like, it's calm, relaxing, love the blue. I like the complexity of the texts yet at some level stucks the reading mechanism.
The main problem I see is that you have too many links and none of them is enhanced as important so it won't guide the visitors attention to the ones you might want him/her to push. Remember that you are the host so you are the one that will guide him. Simplify the buttons, risk to be more creative, like you did on the rest. Flash is good but it's better to start with html to pulish your skills at graphics and then move to animation.
If this is your portfolio give more importance to your jobs (they are your creations and you are proud to show them so don't be afraid). If you are looking more to sell a service then enhance the packages with the prices (you don't need to spend 2 links on the same issue).
Eventhough I like the white in your site try to give a support to the content. Create a system (lines, colours, shapes, etc.) that allows you to guide the eyes of the customer step by step. Simplicity is always good if it is effective and is effective when the result was previously conceived by you. If the posible customer enters your site and goes where you want him to go, that is a good site. If not it's not a big deal, just ask yourself what do you want from your site, what's the use of it, what would affect you if you where the customer. Put yourself in the place of a company that wants to hire a good designer for a job. How do you want that customer to be. Then simply follow the steps he would like to follow to find the best candidate and you will be ok.
Also as an advice take a look at every site in the web, every portfolio you can put your eyes onto. Go to templatemonster.com to see with your own eyes the power of the creativity in motion, there you will find great talents at work, great art being shown and remember that the key to a good website is always the simplicity of your guidance.