Posted 09 March 2005 - 05:42 PM
however, imo, i think you should have made things go together better.
all of your menus are different (some are hard to read too ), all the sounds are different, etc. i like websites to be very tightly woven and dynamic.
cool scrollbar though!
it seems to me like you are trying to combine "techy" with "old fashioned, "cool" " guess i don't really know how to explain it.
im also not a fan of those rotating menus, it shows you have some script knowledge though.
also the intuitdesign on the top left could be spiced up a little more.
same with the splash page, maybe you should incorporate the 'ocean scene' into your splash page somehow, maybe add a few sounds or something in there too.
other than that it's pretty cool, you have all the right content and ideas, just brought it together a little weird imo.
Posted 09 March 2005 - 08:55 PM
I will work on the menus.
I will spice up the Intuit logo.
I will throw some actual water into the 'splash' page.
Posted 09 March 2005 - 10:07 PM
About the web I can say... for example, the splash page has almost no work at all, it has the animated logo, some texts in Arial & Times New Roman, and a pasted image on the bottom of the page. Try integrating all these things, try making texts in other fonts converting them to images. I believe knowing what you know, you could change that "Enter" link by something more attractive made in flash (and combining it with the logo).
The menu is very original, I love it. But as I stated before, you're using always the same, default font.
Other thing I can say is that I see a lot of effect being tested on the page, effects everywhere... some abuse of shadows, the sky behind effects, bevels, etc.
Images are not treated at all, there is a wood image, with all on top of it, and the same with the sand/grass image.
One last thing, the sky image, as well as the blue texts, are too saturated compared to the wooden imagen and the sand image. Try desaturating them a bit.
This is just an opinion, I happen to be very honest and say all i think when someone asks. I hope you don't take mi critic badly, because it's not the point, I'm just trying to help with things I believe could be much much better. As i said before, it looks as you have been years coding the web, but only some minutes designing it.
I think that's all
edit: english is not my native language, so I don't always have the right words and I may sound offensive sometimes, but that's not my idea.
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