I need a critique
Posted 06 May 2005 - 10:48 PM
Posted 06 May 2005 - 11:29 PM
As for the colors, I can't really change them but I do appreciate the comment about how it maybe needs to look more "cheery." The problem is all of the colors are different shades of the same blue and green.
I'll see what I can do to fix it. Any advice?
Posted 07 May 2005 - 02:14 AM
Posted 11 May 2005 - 02:42 PM
Try fading the photos on one side into the color on the other side. (does that make sense). Here is a header that can provide some inspiration - http://www.bodyscan.md/
Move the address and contact info into the footer of the site or in text just below where the site ends, in the white area underneath.
The content layout could be a little 'tigher'. i know you said that they are slow on delivery of that, but browse other sites and see how 'tight' the content is. Yours contains a great deal of negative space around it and it seems to float there.
Great start to the site though! I am not the best at putting critiques into words...
Posted 11 May 2005 - 03:44 PM
A couple of other things caught my attention: the cut-out fo your doctor seems very pixelated and jagged. Could you smooth the edges a bit more?
Also, the italic text is hard on the eyes. The only thing that should be italicized are small blocks of text you want to call out from normal text.
Also, the logo up in the masthead seems to have a faint line within the glow.
Hope this helps some!
Posted 11 May 2005 - 08:12 PM
Thanks guys, this forum is great! I am only an aspiring designer and I've never had much formal training though I fear my artistic ability is mediocre at best so I am glad to get advice from people.
Posted 21 May 2005 - 06:21 PM
Posted 22 May 2005 - 04:45 AM
Posted 22 May 2005 - 09:03 PM
I, myself, don't have any problems with the font size, I think its fine. The picture of the person on the homepage is slightly pixellated around the edges though
A Graphical Navigation might bring up the look of the site instead of just the text links you have now.
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