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My first attempts


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#1 bishbashbosh

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Posted 08 September 2012 - 07:27 PM

Hi, I'm new! I experiment with graphic design as more of a hobby than in my day job, so I thought I might try a contest. Here's my first efforts. Let me know if you think they are a bit overworked? Unfortunately I've already made a rookie mistake and uploaded my images to the contest with massive dimensions. Anyway, I'd be grateful for any feedback...
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Thanks!

Edited by bishbashbosh, 08 September 2012 - 07:29 PM.


#2 jjyepez

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Posted 08 September 2012 - 09:23 PM

Dear bishbashbosh,
I'm afraid you can not post or discuse designs that are still running on open contests.-
That is against DC rules.

Please take down these images and change the topic of this thread.
Thanks in advance.

Regards,
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jjy

Edited by jjyepez, 08 September 2012 - 10:20 PM.


#3 ymuas87

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Posted 04 October 2012 - 02:49 AM

Is this safe to comment now? :p

#4 bishbashbosh

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Posted 04 October 2012 - 10:25 AM

Whoops.
I guess I missed the bit telling me to take the images down.

I think the coast is clear...

Yes, that contest is over now (and I didn't win). Please do comment!

#5 ymuas87

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Posted 09 October 2012 - 04:44 PM

Your first (top) design works better than the second one.

- Try a version of just the letter upsidedown "V" or "A" as the jet/airplane with the gear in the middle
- Try a version with your current design right now as the letter "A"
- Try a version with your letter "C" as the gear showing only half of it to make that curve C
- Try a version, removing that black shadow on the top design and have it the same gradient darkred/red color
- Try a version with "Aircraft Technical Services" all in caps too

Good start!

#6 bishbashbosh

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Posted 16 October 2012 - 11:53 AM

Thanks for the feedback! It certainly is a more complex art form than it first appears.

#7 Babba

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Posted 17 October 2012 - 09:21 AM

Uhhh I like 2nd logo a lot, not the wordmark (would change that), but pictoral mark - associative, simple, memorable - no doubt what company business is.
I saw some of other works on that contest, there were lot of great ones, but if I were a CH I would go for yours, honestly.

#8 dlbonanno64

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Posted 06 January 2013 - 04:04 AM

Like the second better. Maybe a stronger font for Aviatech

#9 ItsMoh

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Posted 20 January 2013 - 10:15 AM

I too like the second better and would do something with the font.

Maybe a bolder font, slightly smaller and all caps.

Good job!

#10 WebStar

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 01:30 PM

Nice try

#11 Sanjaya Kunwar

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Posted 25 February 2014 - 02:14 AM

Second one is so sleek and live but the font is not suitable i think.




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