Posted 04 November 2012 - 10:11 PM
Thanks for checking it out
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Posted 13 April 2013 - 06:47 AM
Posted 29 September 2013 - 10:23 AM
Everyone is right about the nose - too many lines and the nostrils look funny! The lines get thicker towards the top of the nose where they should actually get thinner. The nose is also too far down the face - it should terminate at the brow - but i don't think you need that level of realism, just breaking the top line should fix this.
You can see too much of the nostrils and they are a bit dark.
Maybe simple cel(toon) shading would work better on this sort of character rather than using gradients. Light one side and shade the other.
Good first try and I would love to see an updated version!
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