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Posted 24 October 2006 - 06:41 AM

ok this is my latest project
atrakcije.hr-design
the site is about organizing parties, exhibitions, promotions, musicians, actor all things related to the promotion brand, peoples etc

What do you think?

#2 takethetrain

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 01:28 PM

I like all the different red textures, but the girl in the corner seems out of place. What is her purpose there?

More importantly, I'm not sure I understand the navigation system. Are the bottom four sections ("our offers", etc.) going to lead to other pages? Where does the visitor go to contact you? I see a tiny mail icon in the corner, but if you are selling a service, it should be easier for the customer to reach you. Also, I'm not sure what that other icon is supposed to be--looks kinda like a paint bucket?

Maybe it would be helpful if you posted your site structure here, so we can get a better idea of where the visitor is supposed to be at this point and where they can go from here.

One more thing--try "Solutions for You" instead of "Solutions for U". The shorthand spelling looks a bit unprofessional. :/

#3 Nicholas

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 03:33 PM

I agree with takethetrain - Very likable look-wise - the shorthand U is what I agree with - But the girl I think adds a touch of "this is real life" And personally I think it will get peoples attention not only in a visual way but also in a "feeling" type of way. When you have people do things for you - parties / organizing anything... you have to have trust and the site gives off alot of personality - I like it :D

I can't Read it hehe but I deff. like it!!!

Some of the spelling is off on a few things - dosn't hawaii have 2 I's ? I see it 2 different times on the very top with one I.

So spell check is prolly the next thing I would deff. check out :D

"EDIT" I noticed after I was done writing this - that stuff like red bull Party doesn't look right or very professional also - Places, Companies, ect... should be in Caps such as Red Bull Party - I think that would also make it look Pro if you did that

I hope our opinions help!
Nicholas

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 07:51 PM

takethetrain thanks for advise ,you are right about "U", I'll change that.
Those are not the links, the links will be on the left side(those three) in flash.
About the girl I think it gives a kind worm feeling on the page, but anyway thanks for your opinion.
Nicholas... :-) maybe there are more mistakes in spelling but I'll corect those on "the live site"... :-) also thanks for your opinion.
Thanks guys, I'll post a link when I upload the site...
cheers

#5 takethetrain

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Posted 26 October 2006 - 01:21 PM

Glad I could help. :)




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