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#1 Flavabox

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Posted 25 January 2004 - 06:01 AM

Below is a sample of a flyer am doing for a client. Please give me your comments and suggestions.
http://www.flavabox....ront-sample.jpg
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#2 simplistik

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Posted 25 January 2004 - 06:28 AM

That's your best one yet :)

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#3 JTWedding

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Posted 25 January 2004 - 07:14 AM

The impact or genuine or whatever font it is doesn't really look right to me, and the placing is overbearing that image. It feels too much like most generic flyers for clubs. Did your client want that color brown? It doesn't really give off a 'party' vibe.
I like the invert of color from one side to the next. Contrast is always a good thing:) Good job and good luck.

#4 Ruben@Run2

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Posted 25 January 2004 - 04:22 PM

Yeah, the fonts are eating your image. Dont be afraid: ur titles didnt need to be bold always. Im sure if you try any thin or regular sans font will make look it better. ;)

#5 Flavabox

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Posted 25 January 2004 - 05:47 PM

Thx for the feeback every1.
I've made some changes, the brown is now gone and am using a different front. What do you think?
http://www.flavabox.com/fixup.jpg
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#6 Ruben@Run2

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Posted 25 January 2004 - 05:56 PM

Yeah man, way better. I will go with the second one. More clean and, lmao, now we can see the miniskirt cut detail... :D

#7 JTWedding

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Posted 25 January 2004 - 07:10 PM

#2 is much better. It's cleaner and more pleasing to view;) good job.




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