feedback please :)

#1 Routh

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Posted 01 October 2013 - 08:44 AM

ive been trying to improve a bit...........
heres a simple one i made

feedback please

fhy.jpg 35.61KB 71 downloads

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#2 operhal

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Posted 02 October 2013 - 04:10 PM

Hello there, Can you explain what was the idea for making this? I see A and L together in symbol - and I know that is app and lamp writing below but seems that lowercase "l" doesn't work at all. And App part of writing is not in line with lamp - its look like it falling down. Maybe you can try with uppercase and some other font - this one is so thin. Also, you can try to make symbol more 'alive'. My advice is - when you are working on logo first make logo on white background and only black color, and when you define a shape of logo then you can add colors and option on black background. Good luck!

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#3 HappyGD

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Posted 02 October 2013 - 06:47 PM

So sorry, I don't think we can't give feedback on designs for 'open' contests, assuming this is for the AppLamp contest. Wait until contests are finished before posting

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#4 Routh

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Posted 03 October 2013 - 05:32 AM

hey thankx for the advice operhal.....it will surely help me improve

& happygd sorry i didnt know that....wont happen again

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#5 Zibanu

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Posted 12 October 2013 - 06:53 PM

Go with @operhal: The second A is confusing; I couldn't read it right away. I think it was your best "App lamp" design tend, though.

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#6 Routh

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Posted 18 October 2013 - 02:31 PM

sure thing fero and...the design got eliminated....i sure got to work more on aligning things..

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#7 zac315

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Posted 02 November 2013 - 03:50 PM

its a good start

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#8 Routh

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Posted 03 November 2013 - 02:57 AM

thanks zac,sure is i guess

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