feedback please :)

ive been trying to improve a bit...........
heres a simple one i made feedback please

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Hello there, Can you explain what was the idea for making this? I see A and L together in symbol - and I know that is app and lamp writing below but seems that lowercase "l" doesn't work at all. And App part of writing is not in line with lamp - its look like it falling down. Maybe you can try with uppercase and some other font - this one is so thin. Also, you can try to make symbol more 'alive'. My advice is - when you are working on logo first make logo on white background and only black color, and when you define a shape of logo then you can add colors and option on black background. Good luck!

So sorry, I don't think we can't give feedback on designs for 'open' contests, assuming this is for the AppLamp contest. Wait until contests are finished before posting

hey thankx for the advice operhal.....it will surely help me improve
& happygd sorry i didnt know that....wont happen again

Go with @operhal: The second A is confusing; I couldn't read it right away. I think it was your best "App lamp" design tend, though.

sure thing fero and...the design got eliminated....i sure got to work more on aligning things..

its a good start

thanks zac,sure is i guess