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#1 Routh


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Posted 20 January 2014 - 02:20 PM

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Its been a while since I've put up some of my work to be critiqued ....so yeah lemme know...the flaws and how can I make things better....cheers :)

#2 HappyGD



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Posted 20 January 2014 - 04:25 PM

This is a nice logo :) The colours work well together. Century Gothic is a popular font for these types of eateries, so there's a familiarity when people read it (which is a good thing).

Nice work Routh ;)

#3 aandrei_24



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Posted 21 January 2014 - 12:38 PM

Nice work, Routh. To me it look great as it is. Too bad you did not get gold for it!

#4 GJR



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Posted 21 January 2014 - 03:34 PM

It's awesome Routh.

Only one small issue I can see and that is that the base of the stalk should be more central to the pumpkin. It looks like you pushed it left a bit to avoid the chefs hat. you could have perhaps tilted it or curved it more so the base of the stalk was in the proper place.

I'm only being picky because you asked though Routh. It's really nice work.

#5 Sevenlee


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Posted 30 January 2014 - 01:44 PM

Looks great! I wonder if you could push the hat a bit more with highlights using the white you already have? I feel like it may be a tad bit flat in contrast to the pumpkin? Still enjoying this though, great illustration!

#6 lizonil



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Posted 02 February 2014 - 07:59 AM

I love this pumpkin Routh, the stalk should be thicker at the botton and taper in and slightly out at top. But that said, I think it is super, a lovely style and you will win gold with it hopefully in another contest. Liz : )

#7 dlbonanno64



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Posted 14 April 2014 - 12:45 PM

Very good illustration. Maybe highlight, enlarge the Japanese writing a bit more.

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