men formal wear website
#1
Posted 17 February 2007 - 10:55 PM
http://www.adambende...om/georgio.html
Thanks!
Adam
#3
Posted 21 February 2007 - 07:03 PM
I think it's a very good approach. Elegant and not too busy. It makes you feel like what is being presented is important and not just another of a million pieces of clothing.
Thank you. Anything you didn't like, or found to be "poor" design?
#5
Posted 24 February 2007 - 08:25 PM
-J
#6
Posted 28 February 2007 - 05:31 PM
hey its just an image and none of the buttons work...just kidding;) looks good so far, the only thing i would crit is the white font color. the finer type was almost invisable on my screen, and the larger type is fairly grainy. i would say either beef the line weight up a little so it shows up better, or consider a different color...
-J
Thank you for the feedback. You're absolutely right. I'm going to wait a couple more days to see if anyone else has feedback and then I'll repost with the updates.
Thank you!
Adam
#7
Posted 03 March 2007 - 11:39 AM
#8
Posted 04 March 2007 - 08:44 PM
I looked for something to pick at, but nothing bothers me. Maybe the white on the buttons could be pearl... or not. The frame has a sport coat pocket feel. I like all the space around it, breathes nice. Even though its pretty dark, the background fabric has a pattern that feels good on my eyes. The metallic color is elegant and the hand written logo is a nice contrast. I get the am confident my suit will be well tailored. Will there be transaction on the site? They probably want to drive business to the store, so maybe the address is at the bottom of each page.
Ipsum,
Thank you for taking the time to critique my work. Your suggestions about the white and address are great. I have been finding that the white text it difficult to see.
Thanks again!
Adam
P.s. Have you posted any work yet? I would see and learn from some of your designs.
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