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apeoix design
Can anyone give me some good feedback on this logo i've been working on. I'm looking for clean,...
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Chung Dha
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Posted 11 December 2007 - 06:41 PM
Don't look bad. Did you edit the letter s g n in design because they look odd and bigger then D e i.
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rinaldidesigns
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Posted 11 December 2007 - 07:20 PM
I'd change it all to one type face(hypatia or myraid...NOT both)...and use different weights(reg, bold, light) to add font contrast..
The word 'design' looks 'smushed'...I'd adjust size, kerning.....give it some room to breathe")
and the dot above i, maybe make bigger, and purple....
The word 'design' looks 'smushed'...I'd adjust size, kerning.....give it some room to breathe")
and the dot above i, maybe make bigger, and purple....
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Chung Dha
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Posted 11 December 2007 - 08:38 PM
wouldn't go for stroke/ outlines. It is bad when you make the logo smaller the outline become thinner and thinner.
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rinaldidesigns
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Posted 11 December 2007 - 10:45 PM
wow....lookin' good....I'd kern design even more:)
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guetizo
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Posted 12 December 2007 - 01:22 AM
Hummm....
I have a different input.
To have a text based logo, which is what you have, you might wanna do a much more unique touch/detail rather than that "tend~to~be~a~normal~"i".
Try to convert the text to outlines and play a bit more with until you reach a unique touch. When you get there you got a good unique text/based logo.
So far, for me, that logo is just text.
I have a different input.
To have a text based logo, which is what you have, you might wanna do a much more unique touch/detail rather than that "tend~to~be~a~normal~"i".
Try to convert the text to outlines and play a bit more with until you reach a unique touch. When you get there you got a good unique text/based logo.
So far, for me, that logo is just text.
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Chung Dha
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Posted 13 December 2007 - 03:45 PM
Looks great but don't think the gradient is needed.
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Chung Dha
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Posted 14 December 2007 - 03:09 PM
purple only or a hard gloss shine.
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hackdesign
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Posted 14 December 2007 - 04:13 PM
funny
i was going to suggest using the lines of the E before i saw you most recent image. Try aligning both words flush left. Use the lines in the E to cut through the p as negative space. Try to make a focal point there. The logo looked clean in the beginning but not special enough, now it looks a bit off track, not sure about outline.
i was going to suggest using the lines of the E before i saw you most recent image. Try aligning both words flush left. Use the lines in the E to cut through the p as negative space. Try to make a focal point there. The logo looked clean in the beginning but not special enough, now it looks a bit off track, not sure about outline.
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rasteik
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Posted 15 December 2007 - 04:26 AM
The best one is your very first on in my opinion. u could of done an image for the dot of the i. Most recent one is too busy and unfinished.
In what aspect of the logo is it too busy? The lines are done to the curvature of the a. There is a lot of negative space on here. Possibly it would be less busy with a different color scheme? There is always room for improvement, but what do you have in mind for this logo.
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