New logo, please make a feedback.
Here's a new logo from me. I wasn't sure about the colors. Please make a feedback.
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Wassail
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Posted 12 January 2008 - 08:56 PM
Here's a new logo from me. I wasn't sure about the colors. Please make a feedback.
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Chung Dha
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Posted 12 January 2008 - 10:10 PM
You should keel equal thickness on the whole shape. Also a more squared font because the illustration is squared
Also I donno why but I have seen it before just don't remember where or which shape. Or game cube maybe.
Also I donno why but I have seen it before just don't remember where or which shape. Or game cube maybe.
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Posted 12 January 2008 - 10:12 PM
the illustration squared, that why I made the font elliptical, the opposition could be nice.
If you can find the logo which is similar to this, please inform or link me, so I will change it, thanks
thats what you mean ?
http://www.cheaterss...be/gamecube.jpg
If you can find the logo which is similar to this, please inform or link me, so I will change it, thanks
thats what you mean ?
http://www.cheaterss...be/gamecube.jpg
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#4
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Posted 12 January 2008 - 10:41 PM
Chung Dha, normally I would agree with you, but I don't think the round font is that much of a problem in this case: While a square font would probably look more appropriate, the contours of the font and the symbol both appear very simplistic and engineered, so it seems to work.
The thing that bothers me is the fact that this shape would collapse in real life; it's completely unbalanced. If the basis of the symbol is stacking shapes on top of each other, then you should make sure that they look solidly constructed. As an added "bonus", the lack of balance creates the effect that something is missing from the right side.
The design certainly has its appeal. I would rethink it a bit, though.
The thing that bothers me is the fact that this shape would collapse in real life; it's completely unbalanced. If the basis of the symbol is stacking shapes on top of each other, then you should make sure that they look solidly constructed. As an added "bonus", the lack of balance creates the effect that something is missing from the right side.
The design certainly has its appeal. I would rethink it a bit, though.
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Posted 12 January 2008 - 10:48 PM
I'm confused about the same think redrum. I'd put something on right side, but nothing came to my mind. I was goin to put columns like left side, but then I said, whats the meaning ? Why would I ? Because I added that green part which symbols the S later, and firstly I was going to put that green T part to right side, but couldnt find a good place/shape. Secondly like you said about the font, I agree with you. If both (illust. and font) were squared, it would be normal. I just want something different from "normal", and thought that two opposite ideas could complete themselves.
I will rethink it. Thanks for the nice feedback.
I will rethink it. Thanks for the nice feedback.
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Posted 12 January 2008 - 10:53 PM
I think you need to kern the font, looks too tight, give the font some breathing room;).....I like the mark though...and color...but it does seem incomplete, off balance, maybe play with perspectivE?
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Posted 12 January 2008 - 10:56 PM
ah, you're right about the kern I guess, it can have more space. I played with perspective before I came out with this. In my opinion the thing stands behind "adding something". Doing some revision.
Thanks rinaldi!
Thanks rinaldi!
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#8
Chung Dha
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Posted 12 January 2008 - 11:51 PM
I think you should leave out the green part though. Here is a idea for the design: Use left and top both to form a S for a S and use the right side for the C. Make the name Scuffle Creek and below Technology.
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Posted 13 January 2008 - 08:36 PM
Thats what I thought after the Chung's last post. Thanks for realizing the idea though.
ps : same color for scufflecreek seems nice.
Cheers red.
ps : same color for scufflecreek seems nice.
Cheers red.
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Posted 14 January 2008 - 05:20 PM
The text will look better if you make it a little bit lighter. Also maybe a little more space between the letters of your type(increase kerning) would be nice.
It looks pretty good thus far
It looks pretty good thus far
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Posted 14 January 2008 - 08:37 PM
I have to agree with Uniment1 about type work. Try fine tuning this a bit. It would definitely help.
I'm also challenging the little textures on the different sides of the logo. I find them a little bit distractive. I think I would drop them and use solid colors everywhere.
Hope this helps !
I'm also challenging the little textures on the different sides of the logo. I find them a little bit distractive. I think I would drop them and use solid colors everywhere.
Hope this helps !
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Posted 16 January 2008 - 07:38 AM
Hey, I guess you've tried to show SCT through the 3D mark, however I really don't see a T in it. Or maybe you've just showed an SC? Also, even though I like the form of the symbol, I feel it look too much like a cross between the Playstation logo (the multicolored one) and the gamecube logo. Just because of my association of the form with these logos, I feel it looks a lot like a gaming logo.
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Posted 16 January 2008 - 02:01 PM
Can be the left yellow part symbolies the below of the T and blue wings are the top.
the left yellow part symbolies the below of the T and blue wings are the top.
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Posted 19 January 2008 - 01:38 PM
Oh now I get it, but you would have to look at it from a different angle to be able to recognize it as a T
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