Spring Postcard Contest
#26
Posted 10 March 2008 - 03:33 AM
Nice!
I like the punchy colours and some good ornamental graphics in there.
I think the green background is cool...very springtime...but the clouds motif is a bit busy and doesn't compliment your central illustration very well.
Maybe just try a sold green background?
Also: probably a lot of work, but it would be awesome to see the text integrated into the bottom of the illustration (made out of or weaved into the roots, perhaps?)
Anyhow. Well done.
#27
Posted 11 March 2008 - 06:31 AM
#28
Posted 11 March 2008 - 09:17 AM
Bugsjr:
Nice!
I like the punchy colours and some good ornamental graphics in there.
I think the green background is cool...very springtime...but the clouds motif is a bit busy and doesn't compliment your central illustration very well.
Maybe just try a sold green background?
Also: probably a lot of work, but it would be awesome to see the text integrated into the bottom of the illustration (made out of or weaved into the roots, perhaps?)
Anyhow. Well done.
Thanks for the feedback!
If i have time i will give a try to modify the postcard!(Hope i have time) Anyhow thanks for the feedback
#29
Posted 11 March 2008 - 08:17 PM
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#31
Posted 14 March 2008 - 07:14 PM
I apologize for my absence/lack of feedback...I'm just now recovering from being super sick.....I see alot of terrific entries, keep them coming (Tomorrow is last day)
#32
Posted 15 March 2008 - 04:24 AM
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#33
Posted 15 March 2008 - 06:31 AM
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#35
Posted 16 March 2008 - 01:45 AM
@shajib_gm- awesome concept, love the colors. I feel really drawn to it.
#36
Posted 16 March 2008 - 02:08 AM
@aslan- I like the bird postcard better than this one, it was very endearing while this one seems a bit plain.
@Cmd+X- Love what you've done with the word spring.
@baiskee - I like the type, and the image, but not so much the scratch right over the flower. I think you should try expanding it to make a border shape.
@ Binary- I like the tree and the rays of light, but not the circles or the color. The colors are beautiful but they remind of more of fall and the full circles make that corner feel a bit heavy
#39
Posted 16 March 2008 - 04:14 PM
btw, its not a scratch... its a paintbrush stroke to give focus on the flower and the watermark effect for the bee.
jasndavis, i like your design...font is too heavy for me though but overall design is good.
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