This has potential.
I agree that the logo and type don't work well together. I think there is too much space between them... and maybe the type could be smaller in relation to the AD. Also, the asterisks do seem out of place. I like one DeviDesign's suggestion, to make them the dots on each i. And if that doesn't work, I'd scrap them altogether. Nothing wrong with going simpler. And the text definitely needs some work. I think it's just the Ss that are too thin.
Hope this helps. Nice colors, though, and good concept. Just needs some tweaking.
Logo Opinion
This has potential.
I agree that the logo and type don't work well together. I think there is too...
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#24
Posted 01 August 2008 - 10:19 PM
Very smooth. Clean and simple is always a plus when it's done correctly, and this is. A few small issues that have been brought up already as far as positioning and the asterisks, but overall you've got something very nice.
EDIT: pshk. I wish some people would check the date the thread started before reply to it.
*Points finger at himself*
EDIT: pshk. I wish some people would check the date the thread started before reply to it.
*Points finger at himself*
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