critiques would be welcome!!!
Judge my logo!!!!!
Hi guys what do you think of this design? They're a company that takes care of your speeding tickets...
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Winter artwork
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Posted 31 October 2008 - 04:36 AM
Hi guys what do you think of this design? They're a company that takes care of your speeding tickets for you...for a monthly fee of course!
critiques would be welcome!!!
critiques would be welcome!!!
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kamscorp
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Posted 31 October 2008 - 07:46 AM
it's good but the it would look better if youll make the icon a little bit bigger..
and erase the red color on the face of the man in the icon make it white instead..
and erase the red color on the face of the man in the icon make it white instead..
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RoT
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Posted 31 October 2008 - 09:22 AM
Nice WIP - good combination of speed and guard, well done. Althought a little more work on the shield won't hurt
For the positive one - you can replace the color of the elipse, you don't need to emphasize on the background ;-)
And for the typo - since you got some bold outlines on the graphic element, you can try playing with outlines of the typo
For the positive one - you can replace the color of the elipse, you don't need to emphasize on the background ;-)
And for the typo - since you got some bold outlines on the graphic element, you can try playing with outlines of the typo
The best design decisions are simple, because they don't contain elements that are not necessary... and contain the necessary elements in a way that looks logical...
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Chung Dha
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Posted 31 October 2008 - 07:36 PM
It looks quite well. Just not sure on the background eclipse and the typeface. The typeface I think it isn't really strong and fitting.
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DreamSky
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Posted 12 November 2008 - 09:32 AM
It is quite good actually!
Well, I really like the second one, whereas on the first one I would emphasize with red the tickets and/or the shield rather than the skin of the guardian and the background. Other than that - both versions are pretty good.
Well, I really like the second one, whereas on the first one I would emphasize with red the tickets and/or the shield rather than the skin of the guardian and the background. Other than that - both versions are pretty good.
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nuvolablues
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Posted 13 November 2008 - 12:46 AM
I'm not really impressed by the font... very nice work though!
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ScrumDude
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Posted 17 November 2008 - 01:59 AM
I actually like the red in the first logo! I think the shield needs a little more detail in the one-color version as well. Perhaps a different text for "Speed" where you can have a vapor trail behind it to symbolize speed? Nice, clean logo!
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GRAF1CS
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Posted 07 December 2008 - 01:38 AM
Very Nice, THOUGH i have to agree with some of the color changes in the above replies(white face, red tickets) I.m not too bothered by the red elipse behind him But on the text maybe try a new version with different type for "speed" maybe something that excentuates the element of speed.
Very Nice as is though........KIU!!!
Very Nice as is though........KIU!!!
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GRAF1CS
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Posted 07 December 2008 - 01:44 AM
Very Nice, THOUGH i have to agree with some of the color changes in the above replies(white face, red tickets) I.m not too bothered by the red elipse behind him But on the text maybe try a new version with different type for "speed" maybe something that excentuates the element of speed.
Very Nice as is though........KIU!!!
Very Nice as is though........KIU!!!
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rinaldidesigns
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Posted 07 December 2008 - 02:00 AM
Great work:)....agree, the face, make white, maybe experiment with color combos????...the font works, it has a serious but speeding effect...good choice:)
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rinaldidesigns
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Posted 07 December 2008 - 02:00 AM
Great work:)....agree, the face, make white, maybe experiment with color combos????...the font works, it has a serious but speeding effect...good choice:)
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