Firstwater Fund, LP

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roc

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Winning design #149 by ktibci, Logo Design for Firstwater Fund, LP Contest
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designed by ktibci

Project description

I am looking for a logo that will be used for all website, business cards and stationary for the company. Firstwater Fund, LP is a newly formed Real Estate Investment Fund located in Washington DC. Firstwater will organize/raise capital, invest capital, identify projects and actively manage the execution of those projects to completion and disposition. Think of liquidity, a waterfall system of distribution that gives priority to the investors over the principals of the Fund. Chic but very strong. Please do not use more than 3 colors

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Comments

  • Could you comment on #14 for me? I think it could be a little better with direction.
  • roc
    not sure how I feel about this one. the use of a single color font on the other version appeals more to me
    • Would you prefer the words "Firstwater" and "Fund" on the same line, or as shown here #6 (one below the other

    • roc

      i like one below the other

    • #9 As requested, please give as much feedback as possible now, as I only have one entry remaining, thank you.

  • would you have anymore comments or direction for #7? Or something completely different?
  • roc
    Try without "LP" and blue font on "Firstwater Fund"
  • Hello, I have submitted some designs ( #4 #5 #6 ) I used different colours and fonts. I hope to hear back from you on what you do/do not like about my designs so that I can improve them. Thank you. Best Regards.
  • roc
    IT IS NOT NECESSARY TO USE ALL OF MY SUGGESTED COLORS IN THE LOGO. I SUGGEST THAT YOU CHANGE THE GREEN COLOR ON THE FUND TO EITHER THE DARKER GREEN I SUGGESTED OR ONE OF THE OTHER COLORS YOU USED. PERHAPS THE BLUE COULD BE DARKENED AS WELL. TRY MAKING "FIRSTWATER" MORE SUBSTANTIAL. ALSO YOU CAN DROP THE "LP"...I SHOULD MAKE THAT CLEAR ON MY MASTER REQUIREMENTS AS WELL - IT'S NOT NECESSARY FOR THE LOGO.
  • roc
    please eliminate lower logo and consider changing the color of that middle stone to reflect the urban infill nature of our work
    • Hi roc. I've submitted #49 with the central stone with changed color. But why you told me to remove the lower logo? Do you want to tease? ;)) Thank you for appreciation, anyway. Regards

  • roc
    sorry but the I am moving more distinguishable designs. thank you for your responsiveness
  • roc
    please remove the watermark and try some stronger type treatment - i like the logo
  • Any feedback for #26 and #20 . I have another entry remaining.
  • Could you give some feed back on my #15? I would love to make a better logo with your help
  • roc
    most of our projects will continue to be condo projects or more modern urban infill townhomes. Is there a version of your house looks more contemporary or like a condo building?
    • I have one remaining entry, would you still like the text to be blue and the building to be black?

  • roc
    please try reducing the font and having "Firstwater Fund, LP" on one line. I want the log to appear slightly larger in scale than the txt. PLEASE RESEND IMAGE
  • roc
    Change the color of the "Fund" to black. Then provide two versions: one with and one without the roof treatment. thanks.
  • roc
    please remove the smaller drop and provide a version with and without the "LP"
  • roc
    Also, you can take creative license and play with the color scheme, ignoring my preferences and selecting the ones you think work best.
  • roc
    Very happy that you resubmitted. The clean minimal style is attractive to me.... this one speaks more directly to the name, etc.
  • roc
    The text ("Firstwater Fund) must either be on one line to the right of the logo or centered beneath the logo. Please drop the "LPA" from behind Firstwater Fund and try using a different font. I like the font type used in design #61, for example
  • Sorry, your design found to be too similar to other designer's work - http://www.designcontest.com/logo-design/firstwater-fund-lp/entry/61/
  • roc
    consider the following changes: darken the logo and make the contrast between the "f" and the "w" more stark. also please fell free to exercise your creative license and play with the colors a bit
    • YAD

      thanks ch.. how about this one #119