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#1 samueltolman

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Posted 16 May 2008 - 09:29 PM

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#2 rinaldidesigns

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Posted 16 May 2008 - 11:44 PM

Hello. nice start, maybe try to think 'outside' the norm here....but if you must use a water drop, try your own spin on...........the font(eurostile) looks stiff to me, like it was just used as is, no refinement/tweaking.......I wonder if more contrast in weight/color would help........:)

#3 samueltolman

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Posted 17 May 2008 - 12:00 AM

Rinaldi,

I can see where you're coming from about the font being stiff (it isn't Eurostile, though— it's Bank Gothic). I did try a version with a lighter weight on "corp," but didn't like it. I may explore some other alternatives.

I appreciate the critique.

#4 edwardchan

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Posted 17 May 2008 - 03:12 AM

I think the waterdroplet is too distracting,even it looks like, but it take away the overall composition, if u can resize it or try something to make it more corporate to the whole wording, it has the potential to become an awesome logo.!! keep pushing

#5 VonGizzle

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Posted 18 May 2008 - 11:36 PM

I really like this. Maybe droplets are overused but still it does what it says on the tin.

#6 Vovikus

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Posted 20 May 2008 - 12:48 PM

Nice, simple yet catchy.

#7 chveti

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Posted 21 May 2008 - 01:27 PM

Really nice.
I think you should try also with less stiff font, cartoon kind. :)
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#8 vdubdesign

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Posted 16 June 2008 - 07:10 AM

Pretty good initial impression, but it seems a bit off balance. Perhaps a color change in the word "technologies" might anchor the whole logo a bit. Maybe another deeper blue or perhaps a shade of orange to make it pop.

#9 DreamSky

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Posted 16 June 2008 - 07:54 AM

It is Watercorp Technologies so I guess the tech font is OK.

However I would make changes to the drop. The way it is now, it is not clear whether it is "a" or "o". Actually it looks more like an "o" and though the shape (a drop) implies this is about water, Watercorp is a name and could be anything...
I would personally do something to the drop (for example add some shading effect in the drop itself) so it would look more like "A".

#10 Winter artwork

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Posted 16 June 2008 - 07:11 PM

love the droplet...I'd use a slightly rounded font for the "water corp" and maybe a humanist like font for the "technologies"

looks good though

#11 ambitiongirl

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Posted 16 June 2008 - 09:28 PM

honestly, i like it. i really love clean and simple. the water drop isn't that distracting... my only advice would be to make it smaller. but i also think you could leave it just like it is. i actually like the font too!

when you study a piece too much you start to pick out things that no one else will notice. i think the water droplet looks like an A for sure. the human mind will automatically read w^ter because it's such a common word




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