Need Logo Design Advice!

The whole logo consist of things that doesnt fit together they are all loose objects then one logo. It is still and illustration than a logo, the all just not connection together they are all different styles from each other.

hey rockhart!

it's really nice that you are in for all this critique-ing, I admire you being a good sport.

My comment to your work is simple. the designs that you come up with, no matter how elaborate and good it was done wouldn't be effective if it isn't composed properly.

you have the concept and it looks like you know how to do it. what is left now is how you are going to present it.

Studying the "Rule of Thirds" is a good start. The rule doesn't apply only to photography but to everything that is laid out and framed.

Here are some links to help you with that.

http://www.dcmag.co....fcRo39cnPg.html
http://en.wikipedia..../Rule_of_thirds

Edited by jrldorado, 11 December 2008 - 09:57 PM.

Chung Dha- well thanks for your opinion. The contest ended a few days ago and you can see the winning entry HERE. I'll keep all of this in mind for next time but I think my main problem was conveying movement and still making it a logo...

jrldorado- hey thanks man! lol w/o critiques you can't really get better anyways and thanks for the links!

how about removing the background color?