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#21 Dskwkrs

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Posted 22 April 2013 - 05:12 AM

I like the movement.. but its not consistent .. i would make the yellow dot a bit smaller to make it so also the connectors.. I think you have it stroked.. May want to thicken those up so its more visible.. The bottom left dot kind of looks like its floating without the connectors but I dont know if this has any meaning towards the brief. Networking should be tucked under the title and not over extended.

Whats the variant on white?

#22 Jaraigo

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Posted 17 February 2014 - 05:51 PM

the tagline could be align with the logo text to look better, also the lines connecting the dots are a little fainted, finally I would probable change the purple color for another more contrasting :)
good luck

#23 NLCE

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Posted 21 February 2014 - 06:49 PM

I like it, but I think you should simplify it a bit. Elements seem spread out quite a bit. Networking text needs some adjustments, maybe try a different font. Interconecting lines are too thin for print.

#24 aandrei_24

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Posted 24 February 2014 - 07:05 PM

- Thicken the lines
- get rid of one-two dots
- have dots a bit closer to each other
- or maybe try the lowermost dot as the O in netpoint and another dot (smaller and above to the right) as the dot over the i in netpoint.
- the dots are too simetrical (the top and bottom ones, if you draw a horizontal line in the center of the symbol)
- adjust kerning of the text networking to be same width like the text above, maybe even try to change the font, to one from the same family like nextpoint but a condensed one.
- color choice is pretty good, but not sure how it will look on white or light background.

#25 jecrt

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Posted 24 February 2014 - 07:34 PM

If he hasn't finished this logo by now, he's got more problems than kerning.

Look at the OP

#26 NLCE

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Posted 24 February 2014 - 08:15 PM

Please, if you have finished the logo by now, could you upload the final one for all of us to see? Regards

#27 GJR

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Posted 24 February 2014 - 08:55 PM

If he hasn't finished this logo by now, he's got more problems than kerning. Look at the OP


Great works take time :D

I can't wait to see the finished logo - it will be mindblowing.




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