Please review my Site
#2
Posted 23 December 2004 - 10:55 PM
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#5
Posted 19 January 2005 - 10:02 PM
Good job overall, I would give it 7/10 because I like clean HTML (XHTML).
#6
Posted 20 January 2005 - 11:54 AM
The site looks good! The negative points I see are the very bad slicing and coding. I say very bad, not to be rude but to highlight the fact that it is what has to be improve. Your site will load smoothly and quicker!
Good job overall, I would give it 7/10 because I like clean HTML (XHTML).
Thanx, I will take your comment and apply it to future site creations. Most people think negative feedback are given from other who either dont understand or just jealous. I like for people to give me some negative feedback, because it will help me improve myself... Thankx again
#7
Posted 30 January 2005 - 11:31 PM
Hi, first let me say that I really like your site. The overall design is very nice, it makes you look very professional. I would agree about the slicing...it is very distracting and would probably make me leave the site if I was looking for someone to work for me. Definately clean that up. Also, on the about me page there are a few errors in the typing.
In the first line collection should be collections.
Next error: I am from South Carolina,US and have been design for more than 20 years. --design should be designing
Other suggestions...I would bring the whole thing up just a tad...there is a little too much space at the top. Also I would get rid of any underconstruction areas...either don't have them at all or put something small there until you can work on it further...This is a pet peeve of mine....
Anyway, love the colors and simplicity of design...good luck with everything.
#8
Posted 30 January 2005 - 11:39 PM
When i open the site for the first time it was in a small window. Then i made it fullscreen. The top (provider-made i think) table with those adds about free space etc. was not anymore centered. It stayed where it was initially. I hope you understand what i am try to say. (forgive my bad spelling-i am a greek).
thnx
#9 Guest_euqinom_*
Posted 31 January 2005 - 10:52 PM
Quick trick: copy and paste all your text into Word and do a spell/grammar check to make sure everything is right. There may also be a spell check plug-in you can download and install depending on what application (if any) you are using to create your page.
#11
Posted 09 February 2005 - 01:41 AM
Also, I agree with others about spelling and sentence structure. Poor copywriting reflects back on us designers more than we may think.
I also agree with digitalamnesia about portions that are "under construction." My general rule is this: If it isn't finished, don't publish it online. What's the purpose? It generally leaves a disappointing first impression and dissuades users from coming back. Try to get those sections finished asyc.
Your logos are certainly clean and professional. Your overall color scheme and page design (although a little small) is great, although you may want to rethink your approach to slicing and tables.
As always, keep plugging away!
#12
Posted 14 February 2005 - 10:15 AM
Your website will hardly be opened by someone with a normal 56k (or slower) connection and a lot of viewers might have visualization problems, as rocker also said. About the under construction stuff I also like to upload while Im creating so that I can see it on the web and have something online for the meantime..but update that stuff asap, it shouldn't stay there more than a couple of days!
Consider learning some basics of (X)HTML and CSS it will ALWAYS be useful..I'm also a designer and didn't care about coding but more you know better you can do.. The same graphics with a good coding would have been awesome. Keep it up..
Ciao! Good luck..
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#13
Posted 14 February 2005 - 10:38 AM
#15
Posted 15 February 2005 - 03:07 AM
good luck with it
9 Crew / looking for gfx team on my forums
#16
Posted 16 February 2005 - 06:20 AM
I'll begin by the logo, the glow around the word "Karnetics" is excesive, and makes the whole logo a little bit dirty. Shadows behind the rounded rectangles are stronger than they should (Nrak said all this, but I believe is important to mention this).
I believe the main image does not combine with the colors of your site. Changing the hue to a greenish blue may not be a bad idea, or maybe even to an orange (orange combines perfectly with light blue).
Regarding the titles of each box, I would remove the ~ on each side of them (they have no function at all and don't look very nice). You can try changing the background color of the title bar or/and the color of the title itself so that the title of the box can be easily recognized/read (this is to replace the ~s).
The site is well structured, you should work on the details (details DO matter).
Hope this helps.
#17
Posted 16 February 2005 - 02:12 PM
the only thing that bothers me about your site is that the bad slicing really makes it slow to load (atleast on my computer). Once it's loaded it looks great though. I like the colors; the layout; and the navigation very much. The logo next to your name looks a bit out of place though. Maybe if you used that color somewhere else in the site too it wouldn't stick out as much.
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