PS 3 Ad Contest Entry
#4
Posted 18 June 2005 - 06:12 PM
Right now the background is grey and the PS is grey too. Is kinda hard to make the difference between them.
#5
Posted 28 June 2005 - 08:57 PM
Also, to contrast a little of what Oviska said, I think that you could just tone down some of the background details to make the foreground stand out rather than changing the color scheme you already have set out.
As some final thoughts, the text, in my opinion, looks a bit wide on the page, and, if this were my project, I would probably try to connect the background to the foreground physically in some way so that it doesnt look like everything is floating in free space.
Maybe I'm nitpicking at it by those are the things I see that could use some improvement. However not to discourage you I honestly think the idea and layout are great.
#8
Posted 28 June 2005 - 10:24 PM
--Call me crazy but i enjoyed the first one better. Try the tint of blue. Just for laughs. See what happens. Maybe a little outer glow on the ps3's? hmm..The devil may cry image looks over exposed. I know it's not your fault, it's prolly a screen capture but try to mess with the contrast. I think it would make the compostion look better. All in all Good work
#10
Posted 30 June 2005 - 01:43 PM
#13
Posted 04 July 2005 - 07:30 PM
No intention to disregard the fine idea that you had, just trying to clear it up.
Hope this help.
Keep it up!
#14
Posted 06 July 2005 - 03:12 PM
#15
Posted 10 July 2005 - 06:54 PM
If I may, the background looks somewhat flat. Try giving more 3d dimension to it. And try to make it more simple (now look crowdy). Also your composition have no center of atention so when I look at it I don't know what is the Subject.
No intention to disregard the fine idea that you had, just trying to clear it up.
Hope this help.
Keep it up!
See thats what I was saying about the background as well. I don't think it, itself, is flat though I just think that the foreground makes it look flat because everything just appears to be sitting a few inches infront of this canvas that is the background.
I will again suggest, even with the new one, to try somehow incorporating the background into the foreground.
As well, I agree with some of the comments made about the text. There is a free font called SF Movie Poster, and I think that if you tried it (as long as you're using all capitals anyways) it would really work for this.
Here is a link to the font download:
http://www.1001fonts...ml?font_id=2348
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