This is a new site I recently put up, created for a local bar bikini contest, it is my first attempts at Flash, and I am always looking for crits, ways to improve it, or just opinions on wheter or not you think it is successful, design wise.
http://www.thursdaynightout.com
Thanks for all input.
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This is a new site I recently put up, created for a local bar bikini contest, it is my first attempts...
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#3
Posted 08 December 2003 - 02:41 PM
Good job, but maybe make the intro and site on a seperate page because if you go to one of the links on the top, then back you arent on the site and have to click skip intro again heh.
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#4
Posted 08 December 2003 - 03:55 PM
Good job, nice start. Few suggestions, first right now I'm on a Mac so sometimes things look a little different. Mac users should still be taken into condsideration too
Anyway, on you flash intro I see a flashing navy colored box. Just curious if it's supposed to be like that?
And I would suggest turning as much of it in to flash/vector as you can for a cleaner sharper look, things like the type and border thingys.
I've attached an image to see what I see and to show what thingys I'm talkin about.
Anyway, on you flash intro I see a flashing navy colored box. Just curious if it's supposed to be like that?
And I would suggest turning as much of it in to flash/vector as you can for a cleaner sharper look, things like the type and border thingys.
I've attached an image to see what I see and to show what thingys I'm talkin about.
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#5
Posted 09 December 2003 - 05:24 AM
Waterlogged - Thank you very much much, and that music loop was brought to you by SLrec. from the flashkits.com sound loops, I think he did a kick ass job on it.
Acecool - Very good idea, but can you think of a way of doing it where I don't have to create a seperate page. I am trying to not interupt the animation as much as possible. If you know of a way of doing this that would be great. I tried to set the site up where you won't need to use the back button at all, unless you click on the link to the Bikini Beach, but I might have failed at that.
simplistik - Damn you Mac users with your perfect monitors. I am guessing that the blue box was due to using a blur technique that I might have blurred too much and altered the blue, I will definately look into it. Also, the border thingys were actually supposed to be blurred a bit, but if you are seeing that as tacky, maybe I should tighten them up.
Thank you all for the great ideas.
Acecool - Very good idea, but can you think of a way of doing it where I don't have to create a seperate page. I am trying to not interupt the animation as much as possible. If you know of a way of doing this that would be great. I tried to set the site up where you won't need to use the back button at all, unless you click on the link to the Bikini Beach, but I might have failed at that.
simplistik - Damn you Mac users with your perfect monitors. I am guessing that the blue box was due to using a blur technique that I might have blurred too much and altered the blue, I will definately look into it. Also, the border thingys were actually supposed to be blurred a bit, but if you are seeing that as tacky, maybe I should tighten them up.
Thank you all for the great ideas.
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