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#1 paulojuarez

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Posted 28 June 2007 - 04:51 AM

http://www.flickr.co...arez/645336688/

I am happy with what I have so far. However, it feels like it needs more...something else that I can't quite get my fingers on. More of an actual background, either collage-like, or some sort of a painted texture...more motion. something. Any suggestions? If there's anything you would change to what i already have I'll take some ideas too. Have in mind that this is probably going to be printed at a fairly large size (28inx39in or so), and might be displayed at a church. I do want to stray away from any conventional symbolism or whatever...it must remain a very modern and dynamic piece.

thanks!

#2 Tatty

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Posted 01 July 2007 - 09:44 AM

Too much background will probably loose what you have created, maybe a light colour in the background probably textured or gradiant.

I think there could be more motion to enhance the bird behind the wings, some more shapes etc..

But hey what do I know...lol

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#3 mteg24

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Posted 10 July 2007 - 08:57 PM

I would probably keep the background simple, I don't know if I'd use a pattern b/c it might get too busy...I would try a simple rectangle in the background that almost covers the whole image (like a thick white border underneith). I say that b/c it would keep it more open. For some reason I think very light purple, but that's just my spin on it! I don't always know what I'm talking about.

I love the collage-feel though! And I think the sketches add a really nice touch :D

#4 paulojuarez

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Posted 10 July 2007 - 09:21 PM

Thanks for the suggestions guys!. Here's what I came up with.

http://michianadesign.com/paulo

Scroll all the way to the bottom. It's the one entitled "Hope"

let me know what you think!

#5 aitek

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Posted 29 July 2007 - 08:47 PM

Thanks for the suggestions guys!. Here's what I came up with.

http://michianadesign.com/paulo

Scroll all the way to the bottom. It's the one entitled "Hope"

let me know what you think!



Looks good man, i dig it.

#6 kaukasion

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Posted 29 July 2007 - 09:14 PM

wow

#7 paulojuarez

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Posted 30 July 2007 - 01:54 AM

wow


Hopefully that was a good wow :) and thanks, aitek. I appreciate the feedback!

#8 Destin2Dsign

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Posted 08 December 2007 - 03:02 PM

Hopefully that was a good wow :) and thanks, aitek. I appreciate the feedback!


Very nice work!

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#9 LightBrush

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Posted 08 December 2007 - 05:23 PM

I love it! The colours, the textures... really nice work :)




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