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http://www.flickr.co...arez/645336688/I am happy with what I have so far. However, it feels like it needs...
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#1
Posted 28 June 2007 - 04:51 AM
http://www.flickr.co...arez/645336688/
I am happy with what I have so far. However, it feels like it needs more...something else that I can't quite get my fingers on. More of an actual background, either collage-like, or some sort of a painted texture...more motion. something. Any suggestions? If there's anything you would change to what i already have I'll take some ideas too. Have in mind that this is probably going to be printed at a fairly large size (28inx39in or so), and might be displayed at a church. I do want to stray away from any conventional symbolism or whatever...it must remain a very modern and dynamic piece.
thanks!
I am happy with what I have so far. However, it feels like it needs more...something else that I can't quite get my fingers on. More of an actual background, either collage-like, or some sort of a painted texture...more motion. something. Any suggestions? If there's anything you would change to what i already have I'll take some ideas too. Have in mind that this is probably going to be printed at a fairly large size (28inx39in or so), and might be displayed at a church. I do want to stray away from any conventional symbolism or whatever...it must remain a very modern and dynamic piece.
thanks!
#2
Posted 01 July 2007 - 09:44 AM
Too much background will probably loose what you have created, maybe a light colour in the background probably textured or gradiant.
I think there could be more motion to enhance the bird behind the wings, some more shapes etc..
But hey what do I know...lol
Very nice by the way..
I think there could be more motion to enhance the bird behind the wings, some more shapes etc..
But hey what do I know...lol
Very nice by the way..
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#3
Posted 10 July 2007 - 08:57 PM
I would probably keep the background simple, I don't know if I'd use a pattern b/c it might get too busy...I would try a simple rectangle in the background that almost covers the whole image (like a thick white border underneith). I say that b/c it would keep it more open. For some reason I think very light purple, but that's just my spin on it! I don't always know what I'm talking about.
I love the collage-feel though! And I think the sketches add a really nice touch
I love the collage-feel though! And I think the sketches add a really nice touch
#4
Posted 10 July 2007 - 09:21 PM
Thanks for the suggestions guys!. Here's what I came up with.
http://michianadesign.com/paulo
Scroll all the way to the bottom. It's the one entitled "Hope"
let me know what you think!
http://michianadesign.com/paulo
Scroll all the way to the bottom. It's the one entitled "Hope"
let me know what you think!
#5
Posted 29 July 2007 - 08:47 PM
Thanks for the suggestions guys!. Here's what I came up with.
http://michianadesign.com/paulo
Scroll all the way to the bottom. It's the one entitled "Hope"
let me know what you think!
Looks good man, i dig it.
#7
Posted 30 July 2007 - 01:54 AM
wow
Hopefully that was a good wow and thanks, aitek. I appreciate the feedback!
#9
Posted 08 December 2007 - 05:23 PM
I love it! The colours, the textures... really nice work
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