here's a website header in Flash that I am working on right now. You might think it is almost finished, but there is still a lot of work to do here.
I would very much appreciate any comments and constructive critisism. Thanks in advance!
the flash file itself can be found here:
you have to have Flash Player 9 installed to see this file.
Flash header : fireplace
here's a website header in Flash that I am working on right now. You might think it is almost finished,...
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Dalisca
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Posted 15 August 2007 - 08:34 PM
I think it's a great work so far. The only real change I would suggest by peeking is you may want to add more logs, and make the flames a little more "roaring". That fire doesn't look very warm.
But, I think you're totally off to a fantastic start!!!
Edit... What's going to go in the picture frame to the right of the fire place?
But, I think you're totally off to a fantastic start!!!
Edit... What's going to go in the picture frame to the right of the fire place?
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Posted 15 August 2007 - 08:48 PM
I think it's a great work so far. The only real change I would suggest by peeking is you may want to add more logs, and make the flames a little more "roaring". That fire doesn't look very warm.
But, I think you're totally off to a fantastic start!!!
Edit... What's going to go in the picture frame to the right of the fire place?
Thank you!
well, it actually was requested by the client that there is only one log in the fire.
as for the picture, not sure yet, probably some kind of modern style art... Not sure if I am ready to draw Mona Lisa there
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apresico
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Posted 16 August 2007 - 08:41 PM
Its awesome! The only thing I would change is maybe make the guys face a little more detailed with some facial expression, and of course its probably not finished yet, but a cool picture where the green is in the frame would look nice, and maybe you could have a few different picture frames on the wall. 
Really nice flash, its overall pretty realistic looking. I've always liked the prespective in your art.
Really nice flash, its overall pretty realistic looking. I've always liked the prespective in your art.
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Chung Dha
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Posted 17 August 2007 - 01:35 PM
He bought a big screen crystal LCD screen hehe. Would be funny if after a while he throws the book into the fire hehe
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Posted 18 August 2007 - 09:21 AM
He bought a big screen crystal LCD screen hehe. Would be funny if after a while he throws the book into the fire hehe
yeah, that would be cool
I was thinking about adding something like that, but it is too complex for animation and also I didn't optimize the dude to be animated 
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Posted 04 September 2007 - 05:22 PM
Dalisca, well, it is kind of late autumn, Christmas in not there just yet, but it is quite chilly already
batmantheking, I have to agree with you, there isn't much functionality in this header, it is used rather for decoration. It is just Russian version of the website contains a lot of text matherials and they are managed by joomla. But the next step will be making an English version of the same website which will have much less text and will be completely in Flash. There you will see more functionality for sure
batmantheking, I have to agree with you, there isn't much functionality in this header, it is used rather for decoration. It is just Russian version of the website contains a lot of text matherials and they are managed by joomla. But the next step will be making an English version of the same website which will have much less text and will be completely in Flash. There you will see more functionality for sure
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Arzmir
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Posted 16 September 2007 - 01:51 AM
I'm a perfectionist and one thing I notices is that the picture is slightly out of perspective compared to the fireplace, it's not much and not anything that many would notice. Just a thought and a thing to maybe improve ^^
Reflecting the light from the fireplace in the face of the man would be a nice detail and another thing that might give it all a better look is dampening the light in the rest of the room making it more _cosy_ so to speak. Adding some reflection in the windows can uppen the flash even more.
Btw very nice work!
Reflecting the light from the fireplace in the face of the man would be a nice detail and another thing that might give it all a better look is dampening the light in the rest of the room making it more _cosy_ so to speak. Adding some reflection in the windows can uppen the flash even more.
Btw very nice work!
"I'll make him a design he can't refuse!"
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rinaldidesigns
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Posted 28 September 2007 - 02:24 PM
wow, thats incredible, I really love the snow falling.......flash is something I'd love to learn....
great work:)
great work:)
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