feedback needed.

Posted 10 January 2008 - 06:42 AM

Hi Guys,

I would like some feedbacks on my work from everybody. Good or bad, just shoot! I don't have a website yet, but it's under contruction and will try to launch it sometime next month. But for the meantime, here's a link:

http://www.behance.n...logo-0607/51503

I'm always seeking feedbacks from other people. It helps me to learn and improve.

Shoot to kill!

Denis.

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Posted 10 January 2008 - 02:31 PM

Nice logos The first logo about smoking .. is too colorful, I'd prefer to use 2 colors.

Keep goin entz!

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Posted 10 January 2008 - 04:21 PM

cool logos.
I like the colors very much

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Posted 11 January 2008 - 01:16 AM

The smoking logo is using rasta colours but i agree that logos shouldn't be too colourful. Usually i use 2 colours as well. Thanks both of you!

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Posted 11 January 2008 - 01:28 AM

Really nice logos, good concepts. I like Easy blue, Mycity360 and Twotree the best. Well done.

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Posted 12 January 2008 - 02:33 AM

Thanks ~v~! i really dig your stuff as well!

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Posted 12 January 2008 - 12:08 PM

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Posted 12 January 2008 - 07:53 PM

Really cool stuff, though one thing I've noticed is that you are partial to the font used for 'addicted to glass'... You've used it for 5+ of your logos if I'm not mistaken. It might not be a great idea to use a trendy font like that for too many logos as these logos will not age well and will probably have to be replaced when trends change. Other than that I really like your work.

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Posted 13 January 2008 - 01:43 AM

Thanks chung dha! I hate to use gradient anyway i find it quite gimmicky, especially in logos. But sometimes you really don't have a choice.. I'll try the masking. And Deathdart...yeah! i know i'm the kind of designer that when he likes something, he will keep on using it for some time. But i won't stick to it for too long. Looks like i was caught red handed Thanks for pointing that out.. i should try to be more versatile in the future. Thanks guys! Those are very helpful.

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Posted 14 January 2008 - 05:18 PM

Now that is a group of excellent logos! Very nice work! I love the "SearchLight" one neat idea!

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Posted 15 January 2008 - 05:48 AM

Thanks mate! appreciated!

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Posted 17 January 2008 - 06:36 AM

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Posted 17 January 2008 - 02:26 PM

Thanks hack! a bit too late to revised it as it's already out The dot over the i is a bit distracting i agree. I should have kept it simpler. Thanks for the feedbacks!

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Posted 17 January 2008 - 04:13 PM

Loved MyCity360 - very nice.

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Posted 17 January 2008 - 05:30 PM

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Posted 18 January 2008 - 01:26 AM

Part of Design Team Since January 21, 2008

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Posted 18 January 2008 - 12:24 PM

Hey Geco...it's a mistake The gradient is supposed to fade in the background. You can see the white part because the background is a light gradient which fades to white, and the shadow of the logo is also a soft gradient fades..both fading in different direction, that's why you can see the white part.. hmm.. i should fix that. Thanks for pointing that out.

Steve, yes, i'm on sitepoint as well thanks for the compliment!

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Posted 21 January 2008 - 01:38 PM

nice work entz.

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Posted 21 January 2008 - 03:35 PM

thanks epot. appreciated

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Posted 25 January 2008 - 04:35 AM

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