i'd really appreciate some feedback on this.
Feedback for logo
this is a logo for an organic foods company.
i'd really appreciate some feedback on this.
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DreamSky
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Posted 07 June 2008 - 07:56 AM
I overall like the logo, looks very nice, but I should totally agree with KHDZN that the "people / farming / communities" is really too small compared to the rest of the logo. It would suffer a lot when resized down...
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Posted 07 June 2008 - 08:20 AM
Looks really great, personally I think the concept couldn't be more perfect! It all comes together well but I agree with KHDZN & DreamSky. The placing of the words people, farming & communities looks good but it could be hard to read if printed.
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mklickman
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Posted 08 June 2008 - 06:00 AM
I agree with the above posters about the three small words to the right.
It would benefit you greatly to do something to the "life foods" portion so that it stands apart from the main logo element, but also complements it. The two easiest (and arguably most effective) ways to do this are:
It would benefit you greatly to do something to the "life foods" portion so that it stands apart from the main logo element, but also complements it. The two easiest (and arguably most effective) ways to do this are:
- Change the color
- change the type face
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Chung Dha
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Posted 09 June 2008 - 08:23 PM
People farming communities is unreadable small you need to remove them. I would avoid these kind of logo changing the first letter to s certain shape. You should alway thing the dumbest way, it might sound rude but people are not always that smart when looking on certain logo's. For what I know and look at your logo the gras could a illustration or icon and it actually says Ibrant life foods. I bet non of have looks at it that way but it's a strong point working on logo's to look beyond your own taste and how people read it.
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emoryarts
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Posted 09 June 2008 - 08:24 PM
Personally, the appeal of the smaller text to the right is quite good. Perhaps, as long as the size stays at the given dimensions (or more), changing the color to a darker version to make it stand-out more (perhaps using the same # as the one on the V).
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ambitiongirl
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Posted 16 June 2008 - 09:54 PM
I would suggest making "life foods" smaller and getting rid of the 3 lines of smaller text. Maybe add a bit more leading between "vibrant" and "life foods". I love the color "life foods" is in, but not as crazy about the symbol. overall, good job!
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vdubdesign
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Posted 18 June 2008 - 03:49 AM
I really don't care for the "ibrant" font. i think it might look nice if you made a custom font continuing to play off the idea of grass. The catch is to keep it simple enough that it is easily read and recognized, but has enough styling to hint at grass or at least the blade-like characteristics of grass. Keep it up.
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Unique
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Posted 18 June 2008 - 12:26 PM
i havent read all the replies so sorry if i'm repeating something that've been said...
i think you might consider aligning the "life foods" so that the L top will be aligned with the R or the N of "vibrant". if you'll align i to the N there'll be enought space to enlarge the 3 words.
overall, very good design. classic minimal and with the right king of shade i think
i think you might consider aligning the "life foods" so that the L top will be aligned with the R or the N of "vibrant". if you'll align i to the N there'll be enought space to enlarge the 3 words.
overall, very good design. classic minimal and with the right king of shade i think
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