Anyhow, I had time to come up with 2 ideas. Here is part 1
Sara Bareilles Poster
Did anyone else out there enter the Gravity Tour 2009 poster contest?Anyhow, I had time to come up with 2 ideas. Here is part 1
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jtwant
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Posted 28 January 2009 - 11:31 PM
Here is the 2nd entry in the Gravity Tour poster contest I entered on sarabmusic.com .... It's over now, so I think there's no harm in me posting these... I hope nobody steals my work
Feedback on the two posters appreciated!!!
(see post - part1 for other poster)
Feedback on the two posters appreciated!!!
(see post - part1 for other poster)
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KHDZN
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Posted 31 January 2009 - 10:13 PM
Interesting idea to put the floating keys in the brighter poster. I never saw that as a possibility. What made you think that would make the design "stronger"?
I really liked how you incorporated the floating keys into the first design for the Gravity tour. Adding the floating keys to the second poster would add more visual interest—even though I think it looks great now. If I were to add the keys, I would make them distressed/grungy — like the style of the poster.
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DreamSky
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Posted 02 February 2009 - 08:43 AM
What is her name after all - Barellies or Barelles? - two different names on the two posters.
On the second poster you have written "Barelles" - This is actually the poster I like better from these two (but fix the name
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On the second poster you have written "Barelles" - This is actually the poster I like better from these two (but fix the name
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jtwant
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Posted 10 February 2009 - 02:56 PM
What is her name after all - Barellies or Barelles? - two different names on the two posters.
On the second poster you have written "Barelles" - This is actually the poster I like better from these two (but fix the name
Ooh, dang... that's embarassing.
It's spelled "Bareilles" .... could be why I didn't win, haha!
You can see the winning entries here
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Dongerz
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Posted 10 February 2009 - 10:01 PM
I agree with KHDZN. I like the feel of the second one but I think it needs more flow to lead the eye. There's not really any kind of hierarchy of elements. Adding the grungy keys strategically to help keep the eye moving downward would be great.
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JonathanHill
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Posted 11 February 2009 - 01:52 PM
both of yours are better than the winners, I think they just wanted two female designers 
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