Oral Health Brochure
#1
Posted 11 September 2006 - 07:27 PM
would really appreciate you comments & suggestions!
#3
Posted 11 September 2006 - 10:27 PM
I like the design, the flow of the entire look, still one remark to do: getrid of the black used in fonts, and better find a font color to match the etire design.
The bar used to point "An estimated ..." is out of order...i mean in the whole composition you don't have eben one tone to match that violet. A simple square near or above "An estimated..." should do it.
Though i am not very found of the shape used(with clouds inside) i have to remark that this brochure is fine looking...but opened.Beeing closed the effect might loose so that's a good point to start thinking to rearange somehow at least 2 of the folds's text so that the reader should read with the entire tri-fold open. Otherwise i like the color tones.
I give mi highest on crops you have made and the color match!
Best regards,
Emi
#4
Posted 25 October 2006 - 01:37 PM
While I think the black looks fine for body text, you bring it a bit too close to the edges in some areas (see top picture, left panel, two lower paragraphs). Stick with the margins you used for the bottom paragraph on the "Functional Orthodontics" panel. Lighten up the leading a little, and you've got a great piece!
#7
Posted 07 January 2007 - 02:49 AM
You might also want to decrease the point size of your body text as it seems you've crowded your borders.
Does the company logo have to go on the front? If you could put it on the back panel or something it would give you more space to play with something eyecatching.
I think this will turn out great!
#8
Posted 07 January 2007 - 02:16 PM
#9
Posted 07 January 2007 - 04:58 PM
#10
Posted 16 January 2007 - 01:57 AM
yikes, this thread keeps coming back from the dead!
yeah, I was suprised to see this one again! So many good recommendations! I actually ended up changing some things slightly, based on some of the above comments...
The end product looked even better printed! Client was very happy!! In case anyone's interested, I'll post the final version when I get a chance.
Thanks everyone!
“Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them and you have their shoes.â€
#11
Posted 03 March 2007 - 01:48 PM
How about a messy bed caused by a sleepless night.
Maybe a photo of a tight close up of an oral apparatus. The color and symmetry have to be totally awesome or it will scare people. I see the word smile centered (in a delicate script) on the top teeth.
#12
Posted 23 April 2007 - 09:30 PM
#13
Posted 25 April 2007 - 09:32 PM
#15
Posted 25 May 2007 - 05:43 PM
#16
Posted 26 May 2007 - 08:07 AM
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#17
Posted 26 May 2007 - 09:27 AM
I DO completely agree that sentences should be at the same levels across the page whenever possible. Thanks for clearing that up, Beaude!
#19
Posted 14 June 2007 - 04:18 AM
Awesome job! flows together real well! Keep up the good work!
If you havent voted for me to be on the design team, please do!
http://www.designcon...read.php?t=7505
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