Logo Opinion
Hi, logo in the works for my business. Struggling. What do guys think of this so far?
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arcticsnpr
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Posted 06 March 2008 - 08:21 AM
Hi, logo in the works for my business. Struggling. What do guys think of this so far?
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rinaldidesigns
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Posted 06 March 2008 - 01:11 PM
I like.....
the * *(asterisk) look out of place......
and the type needs some major kerning...but I really like the interlocked ad....
the * *(asterisk) look out of place......
and the type needs some major kerning...but I really like the interlocked ad....
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Chung Dha
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Posted 06 March 2008 - 06:43 PM
The S looks very odd. The logo is too far apart from the name.
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Atronic
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Posted 07 March 2008 - 12:12 AM
+ I'm with rinaldi about the asterisksesses...lose 'em.
+ I also like the interlocked a & d.
+ The colours seem to me, very suited to the name and look of the logo. Well done.
+ I also like the interlocked a & d.
+ The colours seem to me, very suited to the name and look of the logo. Well done.
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Chung Dha
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Posted 07 March 2008 - 05:43 PM
Also look at the kerning cause it is different from each letter. Make them be the same. And use a other S cause it look like it is shrunk.
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guetizo
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Posted 07 March 2008 - 10:38 PM
I like it too..... but I like it first, perhaps a couple of years ago ...
Since I designed it I must like it, right? http://www.antidivida.pt/
and also here you'll see the whole concept in action: http://www.designcon...read.php?t=4451 that leads here: http://pvdesign.com...._antidivida.png
Paulo
Since I designed it I must like it, right?
http://www.antidivida.pt/ and also here you'll see the whole concept in action: http://www.designcon...read.php?t=4451 that leads here: http://pvdesign.com...._antidivida.png
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guetizo
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Posted 10 March 2008 - 03:25 PM
It would really be nice if he developes a new different idea...
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spraguedesigns
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Posted 19 March 2008 - 05:18 PM
I like it too..... but I like it first, perhaps a couple of years ago ...
Since I designed it I must like it, right?
and also here you'll see the whole concept in action: http://www.designcon...read.php?t=4451 that leads here: http://pvdesign.com...._antidivida.png
Paulo
At first look, I saw some real potential in the logo, But I really must agree with guetizo, this is really very similar in nature to what has been done.. Though I believe all good ideas come around again and again, i.e. the swoop for an example, I mean how many ways can you really make a swoop original, this design is so close it makes me wonder. Just my two cents...
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Posted 19 March 2008 - 09:13 PM
Hi arctic snpr,
maybe try to play a little bit with the colours at the combination point of the two letters(maybe make a negative space) and if you placed the stars to say shining go further and play with it more.
maybe try to play a little bit with the colours at the combination point of the two letters(maybe make a negative space) and if you placed the stars to say shining go further and play with it more.
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TommyGun96
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Posted 23 March 2008 - 02:56 AM
Yes, as roro1 said. Maybe you can try an intersecting shape with positive and negative of the same letters ... some more morphologic shaping ... the symbol is the same type as the logotype but bold and a little bit larger. You need more than that to get an interesting logo that completes the logotype.
By the way ... the "* *" are not helping either ...
By the way ... the "* *" are not helping either ...
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Posted 25 March 2008 - 05:13 AM
hey ! the logo is great ! i love it ! especially the color and the curvy style goes great together
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Posted 31 March 2008 - 03:38 PM
"S" and "n" looks like aren't the same typograpy from the rest of the word, some are too wide some looks too thin. Good luck!
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DeviDesigns
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Posted 01 April 2008 - 02:32 AM
Cool concept. I like the colors you used. What kind of feeling were you going for? The colors you used are almost ironic to the name -arctic - because I get like a mellow, but warm connotation from them, if that makes any sense.
I agree with the others that the font is a little weird - maybe some other sans serif font would look better. Also, I like the little ** because they're like snowflakes but they need to be reworked/incorporated into the design - maybe play with those; put them as dots to the 'i's... something.
Also, the interlocking a/d is too far from the rest of the logo. You might want to try playing around with enclosures if you want to keep them distant - like a box around the entire logo would make the symbol and wording come together. Or, 'box'(not necessarily square or rectangle) one of the elements and bring them a little closer together.
Keep playing! You'll get it.
I agree with the others that the font is a little weird - maybe some other sans serif font would look better. Also, I like the little ** because they're like snowflakes but they need to be reworked/incorporated into the design - maybe play with those; put them as dots to the 'i's... something.
Also, the interlocking a/d is too far from the rest of the logo. You might want to try playing around with enclosures if you want to keep them distant - like a box around the entire logo would make the symbol and wording come together. Or, 'box'(not necessarily square or rectangle) one of the elements and bring them a little closer together.
Keep playing! You'll get it.
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Geko
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Posted 08 May 2008 - 04:20 PM
Great colors and concept, lots of kerning work to do and the s looks weird, i dont know why but it looks weird to me, try to kerning artic designs leaving a little space between the 2 words
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