Posted 15 May 2008 - 10:21 AM
I agree that the logo and type don't work well together. I think there is too much space between them... and maybe the type could be smaller in relation to the AD. Also, the asterisks do seem out of place. I like one DeviDesign's suggestion, to make them the dots on each i. And if that doesn't work, I'd scrap them altogether. Nothing wrong with going simpler. And the text definitely needs some work. I think it's just the Ss that are too thin.
Hope this helps. Nice colors, though, and good concept. Just needs some tweaking.
Posted 01 August 2008 - 10:19 PM
EDIT: pshk. I wish some people would check the date the thread started before reply to it.
*Points finger at himself*
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