Designs with no Feedback - Critique Please :)

nice work. In which software you created these logos? Illustrator?

Thanks Gina999!

They are all 100% vector - done in illustrator.

it takes a lot to create something from scratch and when our efforts go useless.... its a killer.
feels like we are just machines working for money.
Appreciations are the real award to us(Designers).

Gary.

Your work is above excellent as usual.

I feel qualified to comment on only a few of these designs.

 

Fight Life: the image needs to be higher contrast. The face looks too much like Marlin Brando in the Godfather. The gloves need to be red.

 

PSCA: The sporting clays or shot with a shotgun so the scope ring is wrong for the sport. The clay targets are florescent orange. The blue target would be visually confusing for the literal minded shooters. (it appears to be a flying saucer)

 

Firefly: Excellent design. The yellow is too low contrast with the background. It need to be more "gold" to be seen. PMS116?

 

To the Point: Operhal is correct. Where is the other arm?

 

Centaur: Excellent, The violation of the circle should either be much more (jumping through) or much less (medallion)

 

I cannot comment on the illustration. This is very subjective.

 

I am a much lower rated designer than you so I hope you do not mind the presumption of commenting on your work.

 

Thanks,

Thanks Herbert.  I appreciate the feedback.  I agree with all your comments except the marlon brando similarity, I used myself as reference but exaggerated features a bit.  That said, It's not a good design anyway .  

 

I am going to close this thread now because I started it a long time ago and I would not design any of the work in the same way nowadays so the usefulness of feedback on these particular designs has probably expired.  I may start a new thread with more up to date designs at some point.

 

Thanks to everyone for your feedback.  It has all been very helpful.