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  1. 10-28-2008 01:54 PM #1
    Gerhard Schlee
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    Talking Feedback on my deviantART portfolio, please!

    Hi all, I'm here to ask you to enter my deviantART profile and take a look at my designs, and tell what you think about it. Be as honest and constructive as you can! I really need to improve, and I'm counting on you to tell where to start!

    Here's the link:
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  2. 10-28-2008 02:19 PM #2
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    Loved the lace logo, that was quite a great idea! <- Anazakel

    Your other logos are good, too. Audace boutique was sweet. Good work there
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  3. 10-28-2008 06:34 PM #3
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    yeah the gothic fashion logo was nice. I think it could do with some work:
    I don't like the spacing in between gothic and fashion.
    Also, maybe you could try a different typeface for gothic fashion, like trade or franklin.
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  4. 10-28-2008 06:49 PM #4
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    I'll try that, blakeissuarez! and tnx, SliverFX and blakeissuarez
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  5. 10-29-2008 10:31 AM #5
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    Just submitted some new stuff, so if you could take a look...
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  6. 11-08-2008 09:52 PM #6
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    You have some really great ideas!
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  7. 11-09-2008 01:59 AM #7
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    I like the electro city logo, it reminds me of the 80's, when electro really got kicking.
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  8. 11-10-2008 08:19 PM #8
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    tnx a lot, people!
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  9. 11-16-2008 06:55 AM #9
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    Looks nice!
    Sometimes it looks a tiny bit... uhm... to simple.
    And some use of color would be nice!
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  10. 11-16-2008 03:23 PM #10
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    Quote Originally Posted by Elessar View Post
    Looks nice!
    Sometimes it looks a tiny bit... uhm... to simple.
    And some use of color would be nice!
    Thanks for the critics, I'll look after that!
    Last edited by Gerhard Schlee; 11-16-2008 at 05:18 PM.
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  11. 11-26-2008 11:18 AM #11
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    New stuff and some much needed revisions submitted, check it out Geraldix on deviantART and don't forget to give me your feedback, which would be much appreciated!
    Last edited by Gerhard Schlee; 11-27-2008 at 11:17 AM.
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  12. 12-22-2008 06:48 PM #12
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    In order to stimulate the feedback I'm NOT getting here, I'm posting below some of the work that can be found at geraldix.deviantart.com, in order to make easier for people to access my stuff.

    You are all invited to make any constructive criticism you wish, here AND at the works respective deviantart.com links (which can be found below each thumbnail), if you can. In these links you can also find additional info on the designs.

    And remember, these is not all the stuff of mine that you can found at geraldix.deviantart.com, so, please, pass by!


    Bruve by ~Geraldix on deviantART


    lanca by ~Geraldix on deviantART


    Audace Boutique by ~Geraldix on deviantART


    Brainstorm Branding+Design by ~Geraldix on deviantART


    deviantART logo by ~Geraldix on deviantART


    Electro City by ~Geraldix on deviantART


    Gerhard Schlee logo V2 by ~Geraldix on deviantART


    Atelier Malerhaus logo by ~Geraldix on deviantART


    Bruve Alternative Symbol by ~Geraldix on deviantART


    Please, spend 5 minutes in geraldix.deviantart.com!
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  13. 12-29-2008 11:59 AM #13
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    NERD by ~Geraldix on deviantART

    Comments, people!!
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  14. 12-30-2008 11:55 AM #14
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    dot com by ~Geraldix on deviantART


    lawyer logo by ~Geraldix on deviantART

    Creative week...

    Thanks for giving me feedback... NOT!
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  15. 12-30-2008 03:28 PM #15
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    I like your work Gerhard! you do good logo's colors, fonts ect... maybe you know this but try uploading in gif format for cleaner edges. keep going never give up, it will pay off eventually. ~ best wishes from Mikey (machineman)
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  16. 12-30-2008 03:29 PM #16
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    Last edited by machineman; 12-30-2008 at 03:33 PM.
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  17. 12-30-2008 05:23 PM #17
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    Wow I actually didn't know that about .gif, thank you very much! I will update my stuff asap! Thanks A LOT for the tip AND feedback!

    Have a nice New Year!
    Last edited by Gerhard Schlee; 12-30-2008 at 06:11 PM.
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  18. 12-30-2008 07:18 PM #18
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    Your welcome, everybody is always learning new things.
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