Feedback wanted

[Caedes]

Hi, I had already introduce my self on the "so-name" section but i forgot to say that i wanted lot of feedback about my portfolio in general and my works particulary so please go, see, and speak at http://www.enslaved.fr
Thanks

[MattMDesign]

Hi, I'm not able to get into your site. I click on "enslaved" and nothing happens. I'm using internet explorer.

[resurepus]

Caedes, please, review the description of this forum which requires you to review 3 other works before submitting yours.

[sangit]

Caedes, Nice work with. Everything goes smooth. But
u might wanna work on your fonts and the bg gfx. they make the site look dull and boring.

[Caedes]

Sorry Resurepus, i will review other work (this rules doesn't catch my attention "oups")
MattMdesign maybe you have a pop up killer or something like this...
Nonameface ,thanks a lot , but what do you mean by bg gfx (i'm french ,doesn't help )
Thanx

[sangit]

gfx=graphics i meant the background images

[euqinom]

Hello, you have a very interesting site.
A few things I noticed:

On the main page - I don't mind the fonts (I understand the effect you are trying to achieve) however I do agree with nonameface regarding the background graphics. If you are going to use an understated font then you need something more visual to go with it. This is the FIRST thing/page your viewers see… what is there, visually, to compel them to enter your site?

On the portfolio/jobs page – I really like the monitor and keyboard concept. I like sites that don’t have a lot of text and are somehow interactive (thus allowing the user to explore on their own) however, I did not know that “sexy drugs money others” were individual links until my second visit (by accident) so you might want to have something more there to indicate that they are links.

On the contact page – This may just be me but if I can’t copy and paste an email address, or link directly to it, then I most likely will not be sending an email to the person (unless its extremely important). I don’t like returned mail and it’s too easy to mess up an email address. It’s not a big deal but why not make it easier for people to contact you?

I hope these suggestions are of some help to you.

[barrywh]

Hmmn... Dark and stylistic with a hint of menacing decadence. Strangely interesting... I felt that some of the type is too small and hard to read, like in the links section. Also, why launch out of the main logo page into a new browser window? (just wondering...)

Overall, I came out of your website with no more real knowlege of your business services than I did going in (ie: how much do you charge people to tie them up and spank them?...lol Very nice conceptual Flash work and overall graphical presentation. You've defintely got style.