they asked for something clean but with some intrest with illustrations. i don't really know if i nailed it with the illustration "character" but i sure hope so.
b.t.w
that's hebrew. it's read from right to left
sorry for duplicating
children help farm
hello, i had to design a home page for a farm that works with ill or trobled kids.they asked for something...
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Posted 18 June 2008 - 12:51 PM
hello, i had to design a home page for a farm that works with ill or trobled kids.
they asked for something clean but with some intrest with illustrations. i don't really know if i nailed it with the illustration "character" but i sure hope so.
b.t.w
that's hebrew. it's read from right to left
sorry for duplicating
they asked for something clean but with some intrest with illustrations. i don't really know if i nailed it with the illustration "character" but i sure hope so.
b.t.w
that's hebrew. it's read from right to left
sorry for duplicating
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Posted 19 June 2008 - 06:18 AM
actually i havent
lets see what the client have to say about it (i already sent it) and if she'll like the style i'll try to add some people.
the only probkem is that i don't really know to draw people in the same style... i mainly draw realistic, and this is my first time trying to illustrate "comic" creatures
thanks for the feedback
lets see what the client have to say about it (i already sent it) and if she'll like the style i'll try to add some people.
the only probkem is that i don't really know to draw people in the same style... i mainly draw realistic, and this is my first time trying to illustrate "comic" creatures
thanks for the feedback
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vld
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Posted 19 June 2008 - 12:17 PM
Cute.
Maybe the colors of the illustration are somehow pale.
I would try aligning orange menu on the right with the top of the text and extend that gray line to the right edge.
my2c
Maybe the colors of the illustration are somehow pale.
I would try aligning orange menu on the right with the top of the text and extend that gray line to the right edge.
my2c
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Chung Dha
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Posted 20 June 2008 - 11:27 PM
looks very good only I think the photo on the let should get a ruff edge to match the rest of the design.
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Posted 21 June 2008 - 02:22 PM
Thats why it's cute^^ Soft colours here are the perfect choice.Cute.
Maybe the colors of the illustration are somehow pale.
2unique,
If you add a few children in there, then it would be complete.
"Once you take yourself too seriously the art will suffer."
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Posted 21 June 2008 - 03:08 PM
For me, children OK, farm OK, and help wanted Maybe the help factor is not explicit enough.
Colors are Ok too for me, very simple and "crayon", adecuate for a children site.
Saludos!
Maybe the help factor is not explicit enough.Colors are Ok too for me, very simple and "crayon", adecuate for a children site.
Saludos!
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Posted 20 October 2008 - 03:52 AM
I like the muted colors too, don't change them. The overall concept is nice, but keep in mind, you need to grab the viewer's attention quickly, or else they'll leave the website. Make the info of "what they do" the most important element of the landing page. You can still do that with complimentary colors of your illustration and fun fonts, but be sure to get that info upfront and center! Good luck.
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Posted 29 October 2008 - 12:15 PM
How about putting bandages on the animals... its a small detail that will give you the "troubled" feeling
The best design decisions are simple, because they don't contain elements that are not necessary... and contain the necessary elements in a way that looks logical...
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