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Registered User
the plug in piece is nice, but the burst is not symmetrical, even though sometimes that can be good, it doesn't please the eye here. Maybe even it up, and add a gradient to MINI?
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Registered User
yeah i see what you mean it especially is lacking in the top left it seems
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Its looks more fuzzy then electric sparks actually.
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Registered User
haha yeah it does look like a dandelion in the fall now that you pointed that out
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Registered User
I have to agree with Chung Dha on that one looks too fuzzy. Maybe if you made it look a bit more static/lightening kind of look? Did you just make the background or logo as well?
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Registered User
well the logo is the mini cooper logo. I made the plug in piece.
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Elite Designer
I agree the light streaks are a little much. I think it would have been cool to have the white of the MINI logo (wings and circle) intensely glowing like a light bulb about to burst from too much electricity. Also I like the plug concept for the word PLUG IN but the font doesn't create much interest. Helvetica I think is too much of a classic font. Or maybe even if you italicized it it would contrast MINI nicely. Just my thoughts
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Registered User
The logo could be better if the outer rays are not so bright and long.
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