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Logo - Terminal Velocity (Please comment)


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#1 adambender

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Posted 26 November 2006 - 10:08 PM

Hi all,

Please comment on this logo I created for a Skydiving company called Terminal Velocity. I look forward to your thoughts.

Thanks!

Adam

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Posted 27 November 2006 - 10:29 AM

I have featured the logo on the front page - hope it will help you generate more comments about it!

#3 x4lov

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Posted 27 November 2006 - 10:31 AM

In my opinion the lines are too strong.
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#4 takethetrain

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Posted 27 November 2006 - 01:32 PM

the falling man and the action lines are nice, but the type kills it, IMO... not the font, but the fact that it's in a heavy block right in the middle of those lines. without it, there's a real sense of movement.

my suggestion... pull the text out of the block and put it underneath the man, then get rid of that block completely. it might not be the best solution but maybe it will give you some new ideas. :)

#5 adambender

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Posted 27 November 2006 - 02:02 PM

Thank you! The more comments I can get the better. I appreciate it.

I have featured the logo on the front page - hope it will help you generate more comments about it!



#6 adambender

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Posted 27 November 2006 - 02:04 PM

Thank you. I was struggling with that myself. I think I will try your suggestion and re-post.

I appreciate your comments.

Adam

the falling man and the action lines are nice, but the type kills it, IMO... not the font, but the fact that it's in a heavy block right in the middle of those lines. without it, there's a real sense of movement.

my suggestion... pull the text out of the block and put it underneath the man, then get rid of that block completely. it might not be the best solution but maybe it will give you some new ideas. :)



#7 rinaldidesigns

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Posted 27 November 2006 - 02:53 PM

:)I like the sky diver...it really doesn't look like a logo, the lines really detract from the design......I'd start by getting rid of the black lines then replace font, and rework placement of type:)

#8 adambender

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Posted 27 November 2006 - 04:30 PM

thanks for the comments.

Any suggestions in how to keep the feeling of "free falling" and movement if I remove the lines?

Adam

:)I like the sky diver...it really doesn't look like a logo, the lines really detract from the design......I'd start by getting rid of the black lines then replace font, and rework placement of type:)



#9 rinaldidesigns

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Posted 27 November 2006 - 04:32 PM

;)I'd say from the position of his arms, legs...hes falling!

#10 adambender

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Posted 28 November 2006 - 04:43 AM

Here is the updated logo. It's much less complicated and "free". Let me know what you think! :)

Adam

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Posted 28 November 2006 - 10:29 AM

thanks for the comments.

Any suggestions in how to keep the feeling of "free falling" and movement if I remove the lines?

Adam


Would you like to try some "falling effect" to the letters instead of the skydiver?

#12 adambender

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Posted 01 December 2006 - 11:08 PM

Nice thought. I'll see what I can come up with. Thanks!


Would you like to try some "falling effect" to the letters instead of the skydiver?



#13 David Y

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Posted 02 December 2006 - 08:16 PM

Very nice logo. But for me there's too much black. Mabye you can put some more colour, shadows, gradients etc.

#14 LemuriaDesign

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Posted 15 December 2006 - 05:21 PM

I like the basic idea, and the guy falling down, but like David_Y said, there is too much black, try with a dark grey or something, and maybee with a lighter blue or green.
But the idea is nice!




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