Logo - Terminal Velocity (Please comment)
#1
Posted 26 November 2006 - 10:08 PM
Please comment on this logo I created for a Skydiving company called Terminal Velocity. I look forward to your thoughts.
Thanks!
Adam
#4
Posted 27 November 2006 - 01:32 PM
my suggestion... pull the text out of the block and put it underneath the man, then get rid of that block completely. it might not be the best solution but maybe it will give you some new ideas.
#5
Posted 27 November 2006 - 02:02 PM
I have featured the logo on the front page - hope it will help you generate more comments about it!
#6
Posted 27 November 2006 - 02:04 PM
I appreciate your comments.
Adam
the falling man and the action lines are nice, but the type kills it, IMO... not the font, but the fact that it's in a heavy block right in the middle of those lines. without it, there's a real sense of movement.
my suggestion... pull the text out of the block and put it underneath the man, then get rid of that block completely. it might not be the best solution but maybe it will give you some new ideas.
#7
Posted 27 November 2006 - 02:53 PM
#8
Posted 27 November 2006 - 04:30 PM
Any suggestions in how to keep the feeling of "free falling" and movement if I remove the lines?
Adam
:)I like the sky diver...it really doesn't look like a logo, the lines really detract from the design......I'd start by getting rid of the black lines then replace font, and rework placement of type:)
#9
Posted 27 November 2006 - 04:32 PM
#10
Posted 28 November 2006 - 04:43 AM
Adam
#12
Posted 01 December 2006 - 11:08 PM
Would you like to try some "falling effect" to the letters instead of the skydiver?
#13
Posted 02 December 2006 - 08:16 PM
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