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About LinkBacksI'm new to DC so I can't enter any contest yet but I thought some of the contest seemed cool. I did some stuff for them just for practice. Would love some feedback..
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11-30-2007 04:30 PM #1Registered User
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Something I'm working on
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12-01-2007 10:14 PM #2Registered User
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I'd also like some feedback on my online portfolio. I narrowed my focus to just two things instead of everything.
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12-01-2007 10:20 PM #3Elite Designer
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Is the fone and the kiss icon your vectorized work? or did u pull them off the internet?
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12-02-2007 04:48 AM #4Elite Designer
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Try not to bound a logo inside a shape. Never overlap that way you did with the phone. Because when you want to print it black white in a news paper you could not read the letters ter. Because printing BW is different to grayscale. BW is really ony using black and white with no gray.
The lips looks very wrinkled, would been better to use the basic shape. The file map makes it look odd cause the front is in a angle but the text is straight. Just got too much things going on. The logo should got one thing to catch the attention and not more.
The joker hat you need to make the 2 round thing fit more on the hat. Because it looks like there floating in front of it. The 2 fingers are not giving more value to the hat, more making it look odd. It better to place the name under the hat and remove the bounding circle.
Remember this less is more and keep it simple.
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12-02-2007 03:21 PM #5Registered User
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thnx for the feedback. i can always count on you to set me straight. will get to work immediately and post my changes.
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12-30-2007 02:08 PM #6Registered User
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secret encounters
this is an idea that i had.
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12-30-2007 02:09 PM #7Registered User
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another one
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12-30-2007 02:10 PM #8Registered User
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one more
this is the last idea for right now.
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12-30-2007 02:12 PM #9Registered User
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wisenheimer tees
this is just something totally different from the first one but i think i saw something like this on DC already. not sure but please let me know. sorry it took so long making changes......computer problems
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12-30-2007 02:19 PM #10The founder
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this is really not a good idea to create entries for open DC contests before you are accepted to the Design Team, in fact it is a violation of the rules that may seriously harm you chances of being accepted at all.
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12-30-2007 02:25 PM #11Registered User
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didn't know
i wasn't entering any of the contests. i was just doing some practice work. if you think i should take them down i will.
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