I've been using this logo for a long time and was thinking about starting fresh. Before I do, I'd like your opinion on my existing identity.
My initials = dh
Another personal logo...
I've been using this logo for a long time and was thinking about starting fresh. Before I do, I'd...
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Chung Dha
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Posted 14 January 2008 - 08:46 PM
Advice for you never show a logo with too much added. Just show the logo how it would be used on a piece of paper with no gradient or a special background. I don't like the part how it connect with the bottom of the h. Its a very odd bend there.
You should consider connecting it the sameway you use with the d.
Or dh with same stem.
You should consider connecting it the sameway you use with the d.
Or dh with same stem.
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bigyou
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Posted 14 January 2008 - 08:52 PM
Nice stuff. I think this logo feels somehow unbalanced. See how busy it is on the left side, just beside the d, and how empty it is on the right side ?
I joined a JPG with a quick test I've made. Just to see how it would feel with a lign wrapping the thing on the right side. It would need some work on the letters (I would move them a bit to the right) and would propbably try to make the lign go out of the circle on the bottom, not sure tough. But maybe it would be interesting to give this a try...
I joined a JPG with a quick test I've made. Just to see how it would feel with a lign wrapping the thing on the right side. It would need some work on the letters (I would move them a bit to the right) and would propbably try to make the lign go out of the circle on the bottom, not sure tough. But maybe it would be interesting to give this a try...
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jarguez82
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Posted 16 January 2008 - 05:33 AM
I think bigyou's suggestion is interesting, but sans extending the h outside the circle. Just have the h balanced with the d. I agree your original logo does have a obvious weird bend which needs to be smoothed out if you want to keep it as is.
Can you post this as simple black logo on white bg? It would be helpful to see it that way as well.
Have you messed around with any new logo ideas?
Can you post this as simple black logo on white bg? It would be helpful to see it that way as well.
Have you messed around with any new logo ideas?
#7
Deathdart
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Posted 19 January 2008 - 01:33 PM
I think you should base your concepts on your goals and the promises you make to your clients. I agree with the suggestions already made, it should probably be better balanced, however I wouldn't advise going with a circle with a closed form inside as it can easily be interpreted as limiting; like putting boundaries around your creativity. I like the way your logo opens up into the background through the h vertical stroke; maybe you could refine the logo and balance it out, while not allowing it to look like a boundary.
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shajib_gm
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Posted 10 March 2008 - 10:09 PM
connection between d and h is too weak. connecting elements using their edges is not a good idea. try to combine them in a different way. may be mix or interconnect them.make two or three schemes to choose from. by the way, i like your color scheme.
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baiskee
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Posted 04 April 2008 - 11:40 PM
My first impression was.... it Looks like Chung Dha's logo.
yeah, the typeface is kinda boring it needs a little bit of tweaking. I suggest you play around with it.
yeah, the typeface is kinda boring it needs a little bit of tweaking. I suggest you play around with it.
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